 Jigoku Alice 2008-04-29 . chapter 1T-T
*sniff, sniff*
it's so sad! poor Hinata T^T |
 ShrtPixy 2007-09-21 . chapter 1~i love it you should totaly do a review of hiashi and the hyuuga clans reaction to this.10/10.~ |
 nejix321 2006-11-17 . chapter 1I think this is really good, but sad. really really sad I cried the first time i read but it's just me i guess. |
 New Moon Werewolf 2006-09-02 . chapter 1Wow. That is all I can say. This story is so awesomely sad...I almost cried the first time I read it! Just how it was written, I pictured it raining...
- New Moon Werewolf |
 NoireDragon12 2006-08-05 . chapter 1This is such an awesome story! I mean having Hinata die was a nice twist, and I loved the part where you said the Neji had failed Hinata as her brother, I thought that was so sweet!! You did such a great job on portraying Neji and I absolutely loved this story!! |
 Emerald Griffon 2006-05-29 . chapter 1 Wa! I loved that story. It was so lovely! (no, I do not love dying stuff.) I want to raed it forever, but my tears are blurring my vision.. must... get... tissue... |
 Aventri 2006-03-16 . chapter 1You... you killed Hinata! Unforgivable!
Okay seriously, great descriptions made this story more of a visual experience than a read one. I could see everything that was happening in great detail due to your great writing technique. Great jumping back and forth in the short time line; it caused just enough mystique and intruige to draw the reader in without confusing them at all.
Your Neji is great! And I love his reaction when Shino tried to touch Hinata; seriously, I felt shivers. Awesome story, write more.. but try to keep the cute ones alive next time ne?
PS I'm lying. I love a good tragedy, I gonna add you to my anti-fluff author list ;) |
 Neji and Hinata lover 2005-11-28 . chapter 1 NO THAT WAS SO SAD OMG I CRIED THAT WAS SO INCREDIBLY SAD. TT TT TT
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 noname 2005-04-21 . chapter 1 This... was a very sad fic. We all know that Hinata is as gentle as a flower on a field, and we all know that this is the way she would most likely act. A 9/10 fic.
And now if you excuse me I have to cry a little. |
 Eternal-Night-Ride 2005-01-15 . chapter 1A fascinating perspective in Neji. You've kept them in character and you showed a side of Neji that shows how he really cares for Hinata. A few patches on some parts of the story where the grammar was wrong and viola: A nice fic with a cold touch of drama/angst. Keep writing great fics such as this! :) |
 Ah-choo 2005-01-14 . chapter 1That is to sad. The way you ended it was nice and made me feel for Neji even more. |
 ShinakaStar 2005-01-14 . chapter 1Deeply depressing.
~~*ShinakaStar*~~ |