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| NejixHinata 2008-04-29 ch 1,  | abuseT-T *sniff, sniff* it's so sad! poor Hinata T^T |
| Cool Ella De Vil 2007-09-21 ch 1, | abuse~i love it you should totaly do a review of hiashi and the hyuuga clans reaction to this.10/10.~ |
| nejix321 2006-11-17 ch 1, | abuseI think this is really good, but sad. really really sad I cried the first time i read but it's just me i guess. |
| New Moon Werewolf 2006-09-02 ch 1, | abuseWow. That is all I can say. This story is so awesomely sad...I almost cried the first time I read it! Just how it was written, I pictured it raining... - New Moon Werewolf |
| NoireDragon12 2006-08-05 ch 1, | abuseThis is such an awesome story! I mean having Hinata die was a nice twist, and I loved the part where you said the Neji had failed Hinata as her brother, I thought that was so sweet!! You did such a great job on portraying Neji and I absolutely loved this story!! |
| Emerald Griffon 2006-05-29 ch 1, anon. | abuseWa! I loved that story. It was so lovely! (no, I do not love dying stuff.) I want to raed it forever, but my tears are blurring my vision.. must... get... tissue... |
| Aventri 2006-03-16 ch 1, | abuseYou... you killed Hinata! Unforgivable! Okay seriously, great descriptions made this story more of a visual experience than a read one. I could see everything that was happening in great detail due to your great writing technique. Great jumping back and forth in the short time line; it caused just enough mystique and intruige to draw the reader in without confusing them at all. Your Neji is great! And I love his reaction when Shino tried to touch Hinata; seriously, I felt shivers. Awesome story, write more.. but try to keep the cute ones alive next time ne? PS I'm lying. I love a good tragedy, I gonna add you to my anti-fluff author list ;) |
| Neji and Hinata lover 2005-11-28 ch 1, anon. | abuseNO THAT WAS SO SAD OMG I CRIED THAT WAS SO INCREDIBLY SAD. TT TT TT II II |
| noname 2005-04-21 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis... was a very sad fic. We all know that Hinata is as gentle as a flower on a field, and we all know that this is the way she would most likely act. A 9/10 fic. And now if you excuse me I have to cry a little. |
| Eternal-Night-Ride 2005-01-15 ch 1, | abuseA fascinating perspective in Neji. You've kept them in character and you showed a side of Neji that shows how he really cares for Hinata. A few patches on some parts of the story where the grammar was wrong and viola: A nice fic with a cold touch of drama/angst. Keep writing great fics such as this! :) |
| Ah-choo 2005-01-14 ch 1, | abuseThat is to sad. The way you ended it was nice and made me feel for Neji even more. |
| ShinakaStar 2005-01-14 ch 1, | abuseDeeply depressing. ~~*ShinakaStar*~~ |