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Oximore
2007-03-21 . chapter 3
Whoa! I just love it so much! Thank to you ^^
purple lolly
2006-04-02 . chapter 3
wow intresting
amnda
2006-02-12 . chapter 3
Wow whata great plot twist at the end i think a sequal will not be needed
Abortion Infant
2006-01-12 . chapter 2
Well, actually Hephaestion was already dead when Alexander arrived. The symptoms described in the records point to Typhoid, because there was a swelling of the entrails and a high fever and hallucinations. Hephaestion was given solid food too soon, by the doctor whom Alexander had executed in a fit of madness.

Of course it's a less romantic ending, but true none the less. I just thought you'd find that interesting. (The Nature of Alexander by Mary Renault is an awesome biography of his. As good as any of her novels.)
laura
2005-10-13 . chapter 3
i like this story! and the way you have it goin now...just seems interesting and i cant wait to read more!
Daylight Starr
2005-10-10 . chapter 3
Oh yes, please add more. I'm a sucker for reecarnation (sp?) stories, and this one looks like a very good one. I always wanted the to meet again, either in another life or the great beyond. They just weren't done with eachother yet.

I LOVED the past two chapters, by the way, you have quite a way with words. Thank you for sharing.
yehudi13
2005-10-10 . chapter 3
such a powerful beginning you have here, very poetic and flowing
and to the rest, what an ingtriuing idea, really
to riencarnate the two of them in New York city?
you could go so many places with this, and it'd be incredibly interesting to read, I'm sure
sequel? hell yes ^ ^
hope you update this
30stmjaredcolinluvr05
2005-10-09 . chapter 3
that was awesome! i really think you should keep goin with this. it could turn out to be an awesome story and i think that its one of the best stories i've read so far. keep up the great work!
Illusion
2005-08-22 . chapter 2
o that was good!!
yehudi13
2005-08-13 . chapter 2
oh dear g-d...you really didn't just leave that like that? the details, oh I love the details that are just placed so perfectly in here. I like how they're thoughts on dieing intertwine all just leading back to them always there, waiting, and the last couple of paragraphs in the second chapter, wow. Just wow. I hope you update this soon
TenshiOnna
2005-02-24 . chapter 2
Thats so sad. You did really well. I cried when they died in the movie... and this made me depressed... Keep up the good work!
costy
2005-01-22 . chapter 2
I liked your second chapter, and can't wait for the third to be updated! Too bad that this story has only 3 chapters ... I really found it interesting. Have you though about writing another one? Do you have any ideas?
aditu70
2005-01-21 . chapter 2
I loved this chapter! Alexander's thoughts on death and his lack of fear knowing he would be with Hephaestion again soon. Need a new chapter soon, please.
costy
2005-01-17 . chapter 1
Hey! I wanted to say that your story is really interesting; I usually don’t read many fics, but I have to say that this one is pretty good! Congratulations! You’re talented!
And because it’s in my nature to ask annoying and useless questions, :) , I can’t help but wonder...
I for one think that Hephaisiton’s death was TOTALLY UNFAIR (but who am I to change history?) in the movie. I noticed that your story is from Hephaistion’s pov, yet he dies in the first chapter (QUOTE: ‘Hephaestion gasped softly as a small tear trekked down his roughly bristled cheek, AND ON HIS LAST BREATH, believing, trusting, and loving Alexander still to THE VERY END whispered thus, “Of course, of course, my…Alexander…my…Achilles” ‘)
Bottom line: from whose pov is the next chapter gonna be?
I know I have absolutely no right to tell you how to continue your story, but do you think there is any chance Hephaistion will survive? Pls pls! (I’m so stupid! The name of your story is “Accepting”...)
Anyway, good luck!
Shiobhan
2005-01-15 . chapter 1
Oh this was much better than the movie! I loved it! Great job!
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