Reviews for Moonlight Sonata

Reviews For: Moonlight Sonata

OddObsessed 2008-02-10 ch 1,	abuseWow. I was so sure it was Yumi, and then at the end... You know how to hide who it is don't ya =] Really good story. Still can't believe who it was... -OddObsessed ^_^
JxAlovergirl 2007-02-08 ch 1, anon.	abuseOMG it was AELITA! I was sure it was YUMI! It was AELITA! I am sorry I can't get over that. It is very good writing; keep up the good work!
Virtual Dragon of Oban 2006-02-23 ch 1,	abuseUgh. torture.
Yumi2 2006-01-09 ch 1, anon.	abuseI just dont understand what your talking about. Maybe Im just ?
The Eccentric CheezySquirre... 2005-06-07 ch 1, anon.	abuseWow. Very deep. At first I thought it was Yumi, but at the end you could tell it was Aelita. And if you think about it, the rest of the gang sort of does expect her to be perfect and always have the answer and stuff. Whenever she gets in a fight with Jeremy he always blames it on himself... Good fic! I wish I had found it sooner.
amai-chestnut 2005-05-18 ch 1,	abuseaw. this was sad too. Poor Aelita. (right? it's her) u write really well!
Little Vili 2005-01-17 ch 1,	abuseThat was a very deep and touching story. I really understood the meaning of it because some times I feel the same way. I've been going through a bit of a hard time myself, and reading (and writing) stories like these help a lot (atleast to me). You said that you were going through some tough times, well I certainly hope that things get better for you. Once again, another great story. Keep it up. ~Vili~
Ransomed Heart 2005-01-16 ch 1,	abuseAt the begining I actually thought it was Yumi, but as I read on it seemed more and more like Aelita. I can see how she would feel that way, and I love that you write the way I do, using the stories to reflect your emotions. Superbly written.
Saphire-089 2005-01-16 ch 1,	abuseWow, I never thought Aelita would do something like that. You made it sound as if it were Yumi. Good fic.
CuteCherry 2005-01-15 ch 1,	abuseThis was a pretty good fan fic. I can totally relate to what the character is going through. I love the title. Moonlight Sonata is my all time favorite piano piece.
D Wolf Falls 2005-01-15 ch 1,	abuseThat was great. You kept me on the edge of my seat the whole time and constantly wondering what was going to happen next. I'm not really sure who was doing the cutting in this, it could have been a materialized Aelita or Yumi, but I'm not to sure. I'm leaning towards Aelita because in that last line it said that the hair was shining pink in the silver glow and I'm pretty sure that black hair can't do that. But anyway this was good. If you really thought about it, you could make this into a story instead of just a one-shot. Good luck with future fics.
Flying Star 2005-01-15 ch 1,	abuseHey, I'm logged in! Heh, what can I say that I didn't already say in my e-mail? You know I loved it, and that it's another one of your emotionally charged fics. And it is very angsty, since she ( that last person obviously didn't read it right) felt so out of place. Her emotions taking her almost to the edge. shivers Wonderfully crafted, as always. ^_^ You're going on my fav authors and stories list. And I'm recommending this story to others. PS. And yes, since I finally was able to log in, I actually got the story up.
Werwek 2005-01-15 ch 1,	abuseoh...dear...GOD...I'm...I'm...GOD...I'm crying here...damn...GODDAMN...it's...god...need to wipe away the tears... You...are...the...greatest...angsty or emo or whatever the hell your style is called...ever...EVER...LONG LIVE CBIZUMI!
Blob 2005-01-14 ch 1, anon.	abuseThat guy who reviewed before and didn't know whether it was Yumi or Aelita obviously didn't read the last line. What a doof! Great work, BTW!
SamBlob 2005-01-14 ch 1,	abuseO.K., that was disturbing... Standing absolutely alone, I don't think that needed a disclaimer; you didn't mention anything that made reference to the show. Fans of the show will know that it's Yumi you're referring to (or so I presume, the description of how her friends see her sounds right; could it be Aelita?), but no names or situations have been mentioned. I gather that Yumi (I think...) was cutting herself with a razor, and I figure she was starting with her fingers, but I'm not sure how it progressed from there, although, based on the end, I gather it was nowhere vital. "To be a friend, a mentor, a healer, a lover... " Yumi flashed to mind... Could it be Aelita? "Every human had times like this, and, it seemed, so did she." Hmm... Disturbing, in any case. Still very moving, though. And still excellent.

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