how is it no one notices getting pick pocketed in these stories? are 12 year olds, with no prior practice, really that good?

This author it's not very good at getting their thought process from their mind, down on paper. It's like you are supposed to guess what's in their head. lilly and harry.. Actually everyone in the story... Speaks very unnaturally. They all sound immature and scattered. I don't recommend this story. One star.

I love it

Sequal? For some reason I keep feeling and thinking that a sequal should be made for this fanfiction. Don't ask me why as I don't know that answer; I just do.
Anyway, I've read through most of your stories. Liked everyone single one of them that I have read. Great work. Keep it up.
Dea-Slán!
MS2513
P.S. Think about doing that sequal. Doesn't have to be done right now. Just something to think about for later.

O my! Love it!

Wonderful story! Thanks for sharing!

Very good! I like this story a lot. It's a little old, and pre Deathly Hallows, but I think that's what gives it part of it's charm. Very good work.

A very interesting story! But Extremely short !

Wow, such a powerful story. Very well written, deliciously confusing, and sexy all in one! Huzzah! Again, I am so surprised that you don;t have several hundred reviews! I mean, come on people! Good story right here! But don't you worry. I am sure you have noticed as well that some of the best stories out there have few reviews while a few of the ones with over a thousand are just horrible. Good luck with all your writing in the future, you are brilliant and I loved this story. So well thought out. Cheers! **faved**

I don't know about Bellatrix, but wasn't Lucius a few years ahead of Snape? And I don't think think Narcissa and Bella are the same age. I understand if you are just doing this for the story's sake and just wanted to change it. Oh well! Awesome story. I will be sad when it ends.

Why the heck don't you have more reviews! I love this story so far! Sure, it delves into mythology and goes beyond even the realms of magic, yet that i what makes it interesting! I am excited for more!

i love this i wish the chapters were longer

That was a very strange story. I did quite enjoy it, but it was odd.

There seemed to be so little interaction between Harry and anyone else, especially his mates. Perhaps that was intended, I don't know.

All in all, quite a good story.

I really liked this story although i would have enjoyed a sex scene between remus, harry, and severus. but that's ok it was still very good.

Loved it. I really wish that this wasn't the end. It was an amazing story!