 Snarkydame 2007-06-04 . chapter 1I love this -- really, really do. I hope you'll write Part Two someday. |
 Judy 2006-08-24 . chapter 1 Oh, I loved this. Once of the best Draco POV's I've ever read. You evil, evil person - where's the rest? |
 Anonymous Fan 2006-04-27 . chapter 1 By far, this is the absolute best, most entertaining take on Draco that I have ever read. The language is clear, descriptive, and delivers humor and drama with a wonderful grace. After reading this first part, I am excited to see where this story is going. The only slight criticism I can place on this story is its cliff hanger end to Part One, coupled with the distinct lack of a Part Two. I implore you to write/post the next section, and give this story a fitting continuation. Truly brilliant work. |
 KerrAvon 2005-12-06 . chapter 1 I love this, I really do...will there ever be a part 2? |
 Josie Lynn 2005-09-15 . chapter 1 That was awesome! I'm speechless... all I can say is that I've completely gone mad for Draco Malfoy.
Where's the rest?!? |
 chamomile chick 2005-08-08 . chapter 1 That was without doubt one of the best HP fics out there. I laughed and gasped in turns. I'm amazed that you didn't recieve more reviews! Amazing dead on writing. Thank you for making my day. |
 alessandriana 2005-03-03 . chapter 1In the morass that is the HP section here at , really dang good fics get ignored. Unfortunately this is one of them. Love the way you wrote Draco; though I'm not sure this is the way his character will actually be going in the books, I do think it's plausable and it's what I'd like to see...
As the ending says 'End Part One', does that mean there will be more of this? Not that I want you to stop writing your SG:A fics (which are also very good), but I'd like to see where you go from here. Will be looking forward to whatever else you write in the future. |
 b7-kerravon 2005-01-31 . chapter 1Oh, that was 'bloody marvelous'! I have never liked Draco more! |
 Mara10 2005-01-25 . chapter 1This is the best Harry Potter fic I've ever read. I think you write better than the originator of these characters (is that a sin? :))
First off, I loved the first-person Draco. You've really nailed him in a wonderful way. He's utterly Draco and deliciously vulnerable and real. I adored his knife-edged sense of humor and the way you let us occasionally peek past it to see the heart underneath...and made him someone you could fall in love with. I could well imagine Draco and Harry and you make a friendship between them (and maybe something more) highly believable, more so than any author I've read.
The dialogue is brilliant! I could hear Draco and Harry both perfectly and it was touching without being overdone (as a lot of fanfic tends to be) and it made me wish for more. The connection between them was mesmerizing and intense, Draco resisting his feelings all down the line--and utterly in vain. Wow...just great. I've got to go read it again.
Please...write more as soon as possible! I highly *highly* recommend this story to everyone. |