 Merlynne_Snape 2008-10-03 . chapter 3 Slytherin I am and love your story I do! Sorry I just got done watching all 3 Star Wars movies. I love Yoda.
I can't wait to see the answers to all the questions you posed at the end of each chapter. Especially how Severus is going to react and why Harry doesn't trust Dumbledore, though I have my suspicions on that one. Plz update asap. |
 Roquette 2007-10-23 . chapter 3wow...are you going to continue this? you really have my attention! |
 hkestal 2007-10-06 . chapter 3Neat-o. This is interesting. And somewhat believable!! (which is really hard for that pairing!) I like it! Please continue this soon! (Oh yeah i'm a Hufflepuff. Badger, Badger) |
 Malene18 2006-09-16 . chapter 3Great story so far. I hope that you will update soon, 'cause I can't wait to find out ehat happens next. :) |
 momocolady 2006-02-27 . chapter 3 good chapter, please update soon, bye |
 Ceris Malfoy 2006-01-02 . chapter 3Slytherin.
Wow. I have to admit that this story is actually tastefully written. And in some ways, original. It's usually Severus+Lily=Harry, not Severus+James=Harry. Nice twist.
I also read that one flame, and damn near laughed myself to bits. STUPID PRICK! STUPID PRICK! THE FLAMER IS A STUPID GIT! The only thing I could even remotely find interesting about that flame was the rhyme-sceme. You gotta admit, it's got a great rhyme-scheme.
1.How does Severus react?
Oh, denile, and frustration, and he'll probably treat Harry like a prick until Harry does something that proves beyond a doubt that Harry is HIS son.
2.What does Poppy arrange?
No clue, really. Probably screech to Dumbledore about not putting Harry through any more pain, which of course Dumbledore doesn't listen to.
3.What kind of person is the portrait on Severus' rooms?
Um...the most obvious choice would be a serpent or Salazar Slytherine, but I say be original. Put Godric Gryffindor himself as the portrait guardian. *snickers* You know, because Dumbledore likes to torture Severus. |
 darkforces 2005-11-01 . chapter 3Very good please continue |
 zafaran 2005-10-12 . chapter 3Ah, phooey. We ran out of chapters just as it was starting to get really interesting. {pout} You've got a *very* nice setup here, and I can't wait to see what happens next. With the Twins reference to Ron and Hermione being doing something weird since the first week of summer, I'd take a guess that they're off being trained to be Harry's bodyguards, and that they've maybe been spying on him already? Poppy will do a paternity test. Severus will be in denial (and it ain't just a river in Egypt), and his commentary is probably going to be very sharp and cutting. The portrait... I'll vote for Salazar Slytherin accompanied by snakes or a basilisk. As for my House, if my color preferences are anything to go by, I'm Slytherin all the way. I make, wear, and sell silver jewelry, and I've got a serious love for green gemstones and crystals (though it's not the predominant color I work with in my jewelry at the moment--I'm working heavily with pearls, blue topaz, and amethyst right now). I hope your schedule and muse will allow you to write and post new chapters sometime soon. Keep up the very good work. Zafaran
zafaran@fastmail.fm {aka Six Swans Design} |
 Native Wolf Cub 2005-10-10 . chapter 3PLease update soon I can't wait to find out how Severus reacts and how Harry takes things. So only the 2 o fthem would know? |
 DestinyEntwinements 2005-09-04 . chapter 3arrgh..write now! I demand it! I wan to know whats happening! |
 AnimeConPhotoWhore 2005-08-18 . chapter 3Good DAMNIT! you little **! *glares at writer* Why the hell did you stop there..huh?? huh?? *rubs face* well **.. i was all into it.. Har was opening his eeys... just found out he still had a dad.. hel Sev just found out that Har is his son from JAMES! and I am sitting here reading thru all this like.. Holy **! this is awesome! and BAM! that's the end of chapter 2 ARGH! EVILL that's PURE EVILL! |
 deb 2005-07-09 . chapter 3 amazing great story ya have there i would love it if you update some time |
 sumli1 2005-07-02 . chapter 3oh, james and severus, never heard of that ine before - brilliant!
update soon! |
 Merlynne 2005-06-18 . chapter 3 James and Severus?! That's just sick and wrong. But aside from that little bit I think this is a wonderful story and I can't wait to see what Hary and Severus do with this new information. Also, in your next chapter could you describe what Harry looks like now? You described his eyes but you never said if he looked the same other than that or if other things about him had changed also. Oh! By the by, I'm in Ravenclaw. |
 Sindauviel 2005-06-16 . chapter 3hm.m.0o0o..nice twist...but i like sev and lily..o well...yay! ahrry ish awake! gud stoy...er i read your flame..and i think that person needs help..lol...i'm in slytherin! i love green- and all the Hp tests thingies tell me i'm a slytherin..so..er yay... |