*stares* Wow...just...wow. This is some incredible writing. The entire concept is captivating! Write more of these soon...they rock.

*clapping* Awesome! Very beautiful... Love the pairing... Love the one shot... *thumbs up* GREAT! :D

-Rubianca

first of all, no matter wat anyone says, i LOVE this pairing. now about the story, confusing, wow, and very cool writing style for it. i was very confused the whole time cause of the colors and the writing and the stuff but wow it was awesome!

1: Good righting. 2:Very good writing. 2: Kinda confused on Major. #:BAD Pairings. 4: I like it. 5:I like your Raven fics. They rock

*Starfire832*

P.S. This is not a flame.

Coolio!OK now the peanut Gallery was have made this pairing fic rocks!

ALE/SKYE

Oh ew,nice writing,I liked the story but Ew,so ew,and I will not kill you with my Mallet but with Flame's weapons,she has a lot of nice weapons to kill you with!gosh that's so gross,ew,really for that you can't see Electra with me and Ali tonight,sorry.