Oh, this is wonderful! Kristy/Dawn is my OTP, and you portrayed them both really really. Kristy is wonderfully IC.

Adorable. You were realistic with Kristy-no fits of uncontrollable passion or spells of angst. Subtly moving.

I have read very few good BSC fics, but this was definitely good! Very well written, and I just love Kristy.

Nice job. You write Kristy very well. Really, she's much more palatable here than she ever was in the books, especially when the ghostwriters stepped in. Very in character, but still smooth and easy to read.

You got Mary Anne perfectly, too. Heh.

Very sweet.

I think it was beautiful.