Wow great story. Pretty sad. Leo had a hard time in captivity. You'd think his family woulda been able to help him sooner. Great job! :D

Hmm, the cliffhanger awaits, I see. Sneaky, sneaky. Fine, I'll go read the sequel. ;)

Nice job.

Aw, that was sweet.

A turtle going a week without water. Ouch.

You tell him Leo!

Leo's problem's not schizophrenia, it's post traumatic stress disorder.

Great start, and I can't wait to finish reading the rest. I hope more flashbacks are on the menu.

Wow. Simply, wow. That was an awesome yet extremely heart breaking story. O_O I could really feel the emotion of this piece. And I must admit, I LOVED the Leo/Don interaction here. I thought I hated Saki before I read this, now...let's just say I hope I never meet him a dark alley because he won't be walking out alive. {sinister grin}

But in all seriousness, this was excellent! I hope the guys can avoid the Foot until Leo's all better. Don't torture him anymore!! Keep up the great work! ^_^

Awesome story. You did a good job with this. I can't wait to read your sequel. You are a good writer.

The Bubbly One,
Shell

Hey honey! Your story was SO brilliant. I totally loved it! Fabulous! I loved the angst, for what is life without angst. You portray such a wonderfully darker side than ever imaginable, but do it so well with wonderful articulation and imagery. Bravo mon petit cherie! x x x xx x

Good... wel wrritten... but i think u need to see a counceler, wow wat a lot of angust!

This is so deep. I'm not sure if I could write a story like this. Excellent job! But poor Leo! Saki better not find them...

okay, i know i 'reviewed' this on your site as Cassie but i had to review it here too! i still absolutly love it, it's so incredable!!

Well, how DID I miss this update? Goodness, the mysteries of Fan Fiction - or an addled, menopausal mind. LOL

This was a terrific ending - if it can be called that, considering you you've interwoven Saki into the mix again. I loved how realistic it was, the comments, the reaction, no wasted words or too many to bog down the pace. Nicely done.

I loved Don's excuse about Mike breaking April's kitchen window, though! Oh, and his request for a blanket, too, but keeping said blanket-news from his other brothers! LOL

This whole Donnie/Leo things was very nice. Loved it.

Anyway, I didn't realize you had epilogued this until a moment ago when it's sequel showed up on my 'alert' doorstep. So, as soon as I can, I'm heading over there.

Great job!

Be blessed.

Wow, this was pretty good for your first attempt. I enjoyed it thouroughly, and hope to find more stories by you. Awesome story!

OMG! You finished this! I love you! *hugs!*

Don't you feel all warm and fuzzy now that you have a finished one under your belt? :)

This kinda ended on a cliffhanger...sort of. Is there a sequel?

Anyway, good job! Be proud of yourself, you should be.