 Black Rainy 2005-06-01 . chapter 3This is really cool! I love it! But when is the "Drama King" going to "Confess"? There's only one thing that I'm kinda confused about: If Beatrice is a girl, then shouldn't Adam/Jet be calling her "Mistress" instead of "Master"? Otherwise, everything's fine!
Update soon!
Rain Wind Girl |
 Hiei's phoenix girl 2005-05-13 . chapter 3Hm...very intriguing... Jet's a tad bit OOC...but I suppose that is to be expected. *cooes at own WA3 game* Ah...they need to hurry up and release WA: ACF...and WA4... :) Nice fic and I look forward to reading more.
-Hiei's Phoenix Girl |
 Luna-Starr 2005-05-12 . chapter 3Great Work! And poor Jet...Very good descriptons! ANd Yay! U updated sooner! |
 Teefa and Co 2005-05-01 . chapter 3Teefa: If she hurts Jet any more...we'll kill her! Right Prier?!
Prier: Righ on Teefa!
Skysplitter: (thinking) She's turned the La Pucelle brat into a screaming fangirl. Oh the humanity!
Lufia: I feel so sorry for Jet; having all that emotional trauma. And Beatrice feeding him lies to keep him from the people who really care about him.
Rutee: I feel sorry for Ginny; she's going to freak out and get real depressed. But then again, maybe we'll see her hold him close and tell him everything'll be ok and love him and. . .(trails off in her own dreamworld)
Skysplitter: (thinking) It's official! My master and her friends are all insane! |
 Luna-Starr 2005-04-28 . chapter 2YAY! U UPDATED! WOT!! I like this story, and its intersting. Its more orignal than most of the stuff I read in WA section. Anyway, I hope to read more. UPDATE SOON! |
 Teefa and Co 2005-04-27 . chapter 2Teefa: The slow down in our part is cuz of La Pucelle.
Rutee: I blame Croix!
Prier: (hits Rutee with her baton) Croix is not to blame. You guys just have too much on your list.
Lufia: (mutters) This from the girl he's sleeping with. . .
Prier: What was that?!
Lufia: Oh nothing!
Teefa: Anyway! I feel sorry for Ginny. I hope she beats Beatrice up good and gets Jet back soon. Else we'll send Prier in again.
Skysplitter: Cruel and unusual punishment Teefa!
(Teefa hits Sky with Mallet-sama while Prier hits her with the baton) |
 Diamond Avatar 2005-01-18 . chapter 1I like where the story's going, and the way you describe things is like magic! Hehe, update soon!
D.A- Off to go humming in the dark. |
 Luna-Starr 2005-01-16 . chapter 1NO!! JET DON'T BELIEVE BEATRICE!! SHES A CREEPY DEMON THINGY!! Wow, i like this fic good descriptions!! very suspenseful!! update PLEASE!! Poor Jetty...
Jet: DON'T CALL ME JETTY!!
Luna:hehehe!
Jet: CRAZY PSYCHO!! ::runs off::
Luna: NOO!! COME BACK! |
 Teefa and Co 2005-01-15 . chapter 1Teefa: Ginny is going to go postal on Beatrice when she find's the brat messing with poor Jet's mind.
Lufia: Oh yeah! Can't wait to see what happens next.
Rutee: Guys! I've got an even better idea. I brought a special guest though our Dimensional Portal.
Prier: (La Pucelle; wearing a trench coat w/ jeans and a white T-shirt ala Croix) Ok, where's the Demon you hired me to hunt?
Rutee: Right this way my dear. Remember, I've given you the equivolent of 10,0 Prica up front so you better get it done.
Prier: She's toast. . . (goes through portal)
Teefa: Why Prier? She's too voilent.
Rutee: Revenge. What else? |