Just brilliant. What everyone else said.

WOW!! You write the BEST comedy poems! hahaha.

I wish I had your talent. Enough said.

"I hear the Deeping-Wall is see-through;
All Morgul's residents are shrill..."

It is so deeply, deeply refreshing to find humor based so firmly in canon, both in style and content. I love this cheeky, lovely little poem. (And it *is* lovely, a pure child-like loveliness.) Thank you for reminding me that humor in this fandom doesn't have to be about Pippin eating the Ring or Mary Sues being unimaginatively slain.

Very hobbit-like and clever!! This is a delight to read!
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Wow. That was a most successful (and most humorous) reduction of the major locations in Middle-earth into one-liners. Funny and well done.

Yes! Definitely hobbity! Cute, very cute! I gotta wonder how long it took you to get this written?

How brilliantly hobbity! Usually anything leaning towards humor in this section has no thought for canon, but you've managed quite nicely. Well done, have anything else up your sleeve?

This is great! The rhythm and rhyme scheme are light and hobbity, and the words are so cheeky I can see Pippin singing them and grinning. Great job!

Brilliant! Funny, accurate and above all well written.