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LeoDesirePassion
2008-01-20 . chapter 2
aww i think that was so cute i lov it
LeoDesirePassion
2008-01-20 . chapter 1
oh i lov how u writ really i do -sigh- gosh this was just wondeful really
grace
2006-05-18 . chapter 2
you're mean...you made me cry...with the descriptions of inuyasha and gang dying...and her changing...most naraku/kagome fan fics are just OH LOOK, SEX SEX SEX SEX SEX RAPE SUBMISSION

but seriously,i cried at some parts...you're a beautiful writer. like, the part where she talked about her family...her grandfather dying, that he was mad, her mom turning mad...souta growing up and getting married...sorry, i'm a sentimental creature.

basically, your stories are beautiful. =)
Peenya Kowlada
2006-01-06 . chapter 2
Aw~. So cute. And it fits with the other story perfectly. And even though it's sort of OOC, it's in this way that still fits with Naraku's character...it perfect! XD I loves it.
Midorinokurokami
2005-05-17 . chapter 2
That was great! I loved that story! Don't worry about spelling errors, we all make them ^_^. I think it was so sweet and fluffy! You can never have a story that is too fluffy, because when people are in love, they tend do things like that for one another, whether or not they mean to, whether or not they realize it. There really isn't a such thing as OOC to me, because all people can change (like I said before) and no one knows why we do things, except us, so who knows whats really going on in the character's head? They might act tough and cold on the outside, and really be such a softie on the inside. Who knows what goes on Naraku's head? Sorry, I'm rambling, but you get the idea ^_^. Oh, and I can't email you for some reason >.
atamagaokashii Ookami
2005-05-16 . chapter 2
good story
Triina
2005-04-03 . chapter 1
This has to be one of my favourite Inuyasha stories I've ever read, it's just so... original compared to the others, and so well-written!
Darkness living in Hope
2005-03-31 . chapter 1
i love it. keep up the great work
Sophie-chan
2005-03-21 . chapter 2
Yep, that was corny as heck.(That means it was very, very corny!) One question, the cat in the end is that suposed to be like a replacement for Buyo? I don't care I'm just ciurious, you don't have to tell me if you don't want to. (That sounds like Sesshoumaru huh?) Anyway keep writing stories! You rock! BYE!
akuma-river
2005-03-21 . chapter 2
Kawaii. I love this story. Keep up the awesome work. coolsa.
TigressMoon
2005-03-17 . chapter 1
I must say that was one of the best first chapters I've read in a while. The tension was almost papable. Very nice. I'll continue on now. Kudos to you.
Evil sango19
2005-03-14 . chapter 2
A very dark romantic story! I loved that u killed off the hole inu-group! That was very dark and I write alot of dark stories! I'm put your story on my favorite list!
Oh and I would like to talk to you about your next story. If you want email me at
theresaburleigh @ Ok Gabreilla Moushiqo
Heavenly Faye-Faye
2005-03-02 . chapter 2
I LOVE all of your fics! YOur an awesome writer. I especially liked "The Spider and the Butterfly". ^_^ This fic was very angsty...it made me cry. Like all of your Nar/Kag fics! Why do you have to make everything sad?! WHY?! Oh well, this fic gave me a good laugh. And I LOVED the ending. I have lots of Naraku/Kagome fics - do you want to read them? It'd made me so pleased if you did! I saw your artwork, too. They were good! I liked the cover for "Sleeping With the Enemy" *blush* But man, that one part where Kagome wore his clothes was too funny! (My sides hurt too, Naraku. I felt your pain...) But the ending of this was too cute! ^_^ Great job - continue your reign of wonderful fics (lol)! -^_^-

~Heavenly Faye-Faye~
Sin of Pride
2005-02-26 . chapter 2
Aww, how sweet...Inever knew Naraku could be such a...romantic.
Hoshi-chan1
2005-02-22 . chapter 2
wai wonderful!
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