OH! That is so sad! You should have riven turn around and say sorry and then they could get together and she would have at least one happy thing in her life!! Give it a try!

Wow, that sounds... interesting. It's awesome that Musa has the focus in this fanfic, she's my fave charcter. Update soo, I want to find out what happens!

I loved it! Great job! And it totally gave me an inspiration for a WINX story! (Hope you don't mind) ^_^ PLEASE WRITE MORE

Cool! You should TOTALLY write more chapters, to continue the story u no! Have you written any more chapters and/or stories?

So sad

Aww. it's so cute. ^.^
Though one thing is bugging me. Yin and Yang, while being completely different, are conjoined. And I'm not sure if you meant that on purpose, or by accident but for one to exist, so must the other.

I love it! It's sad, but good! Write a sequel. Or something! Write an actual story like this, to prove the point!

Deep, beautiful, and well-written.

~Seph

Wow that was so sad. I loved it! Are you going to write more?