Wow, that was so cute!

Just a question, exactly where does this happen in the manga? Do you have, like, relative locations or chapter numbers? Because I really don't remember this happening, and it sounds so sweet!

aww he really cares for her dosent he

im reviewing so u better get your lil hiney in gear and rite, NOW lol, im not that pushy but i do like the story so far

Great story! Love it, love it, love it~ But maybe try not to mix english and japanese stuff together- either use one set or the other (eg. odango =/= Serena). Keep writing!

that was sad! :(.. but hey, I liked the way you described darien's feelings. I hate when some writers describe Darien as a cold insensitive jerk. Keep up the good work! :D

Your writing is so eloquent and so descriptive! It's almost as if I could reach out and touch Darnie, and feel the sweat running down his brow. Once again you've nurtured my senses with this. Your writing is fantastic - I really hope you know that. It's a shame you don't have more posted. In fact, I think I'm going to add another chapter to one of my stories today - you've inspired me :)

omg!! is he really gona do that!anyways great chapter! can't wait till the next one hope you update it soon ok bye

*Sniffles* Aww bless him.. That's so sweet.. another great story