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Kara
2005-09-17
ch 1, anon.
abuseWow. Bittersweet. I love how they can't figure out where to put Anya, and she ends up meeting Lorne in a karioke (sp?) bar. And how Lorne goes to try and save their lives, even though he's sick of everything. I'm glad you've written many stories, so I can read them all. And have favorite stories, because I can go and read all those, too. :) Have a nice day. :)
YamiPaladinofChaos
2005-08-15
ch 1,
abuseExcellent... I like Lorne's POV. An interesting cat, that one was.
Eurydice11
2005-08-10
ch 1,
abuseThis was amazing. Your Lorne voice was spot-on, and throwing Anya into the mix was brilliant. My favorite part was this:

Anya’s pretty forehead is all crinkles. “That’s strangely profound, yet makes no sense at all.”

I chuckle bitterly. “Doesn’t that just say it all, though?”

Wonderful work!
CindaEdna
2005-02-26
ch 1,
abuseYou captured Lorne's character beautifully. Great story.
Selena Style
2005-02-04
ch 1,
abuseExcellent follow up on Lorne and well written, totally is lingo. I loved the Anya added in too. Very nice.
Jess
2005-01-22
ch 1, anon.
abuseFantastic Lorne voice, and a lovely mood and setting. I loved it!
MysticWolf1
2005-01-20
ch 1,
abuseVery profound!! I really enjoyed this. You have Anya and Lorne's characters down to a T.
Izhilzha
2005-01-18
ch 1,
abuseOh, wow. A balance of humor and heartbreak, with a sharp sprinkling of truth. I particularly enjoyed Lorne's unwillingness to display his own secrets to Anya. It felt absolutely in character, and added such an edge (of lonliness, I guess) to the mood.

Thanks for this.
MBB
2005-01-17
ch 1,
abusenice fic, good to know what happened to Lorne after he left :-)
Peter
2005-01-17
ch 1, anon.
abuseAbsolutely fantastic. You captured Lorne perfectly and this is a perfect epitaph to Angel. Your characterisation was spot on and I'm now off to read more of your work. Thank you.
AngelWings8
2005-01-17
ch 1,
abuseVery, very good. I liked it enough to log in just to give you a good review. Great job.
physicsteach
2005-01-17
ch 1,
abuseNice. Simple, sweet, profound. Both characters felt right. Introspective Lorne? Yeah. Nice.
Imzadi
2005-01-17
ch 1,
abuseFirst of all, I love Sarah Brightman's voice. I have the original Phantom CD, which is in my car stereo and keeps me from going nutzo in the D.C. area traffic. Kristin Chenoweth is talented, but I can't stand that little girl voice of hers. I hope someone can help Anya; I've always liked her best of all the Buffy characters, and you do her very well. As for Lorne, he deserves what he has. He didn't have to kill Lindsey, just as Angel didn't have to cut off his hand. They both took the easy way out. And Lorne wasn't a flunky--at least not until then. I can't forgive him. There had to have been other options. Burn in hell, Lorne! You too, Angel.
LesserKnown
2005-01-16
ch 1,
abuseBrillant as always. You are a joy to read. The voices were perfect!

Gotta love a little fanfic for Christmas, eh?
bunn2007
2005-01-16
ch 1,
abuseyour story was very touching. i liked it a lot.
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