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| Ganymede 2008-05-30 ch 1, anon. | abuseLoved this little quick bit of a story. =) |
| Pixley 2005-04-07 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow. I'd forgotten what a great writer you are, and how well you do dialogue. This was wonderful and you have the characters' voice down so well! |
| Imjustafan 2005-03-07 ch 1,  | abuseYou´ve written fics again...I´m really glad I found this one. I love all your stories. This story is awesome! |
| just me 2005-01-22 ch 1, anon. | abuseAre you the writer of the fiction Investigate the Magic? Was it finished and if so where is it located? Really enjoyed this story. |
| SAR 2005-01-17 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat was great. Thanks. |
| Im Stoked 2005-01-17 ch 1, | abuseI loved this! I love how you have them quoting philosophers-so characteristic of them. Not a big G/S fan but I did love this. Your writing is superb! |
| ActuatedStarla 2005-01-17 ch 1, | abuseThis is so much more than mediocre it wonderful. It's so real... I love the idea and I can honestly imagine it happening. It's wonderful as I said before. |
| Sila Ninque 2005-01-17 ch 1, | abuseExcellent job...I love it! You have a great grasp of spelling and grammar and such, and your storyline and characters are all very good...can't really find anything to critique. Great work! |
| gglovebug 2005-01-17 ch 1, | abuseBrilliantly done! Excellent dialogue. Everything laid out in the open, but without actually saying "it" - so true to Grissom and Sara's characters. Seemless use of the challenge elements as well. I'm so glad you're writing again and I hope you continue! |
| mossley 2005-01-17 ch 1, | abuseNice to see you writing again. I admire people that can do the elemental challenges and get the necessary items included so smoothly. Great use of the required elements and a nice insight into the characters. Hope this means you'll be writing more soon. |
| niff74 2005-01-17 ch 1, | abuseWow. And to think that we could've enjoyed your writing for the past year or so... This was wonderfully done. Our geeks perfectly in character, the metaphors flying from one side to the other like an olympics ping-pong match, and the overall feel of tension, but still more comfortable than they've been in quite some time. New year's resolution - harass you to write more. |
| courtney 2005-01-16 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow. I absolutely -loved- this. Great work! |
| Sadie555 2005-01-16 ch 1, | abuseWow! Cool! I like it, and I like the Elements Maybe I'll try it. But till then, come check out my fanfic, The Killing Truth. Also, a complete Sara/Grissom Poem, The Five W's Of Geek Love. |
| rokothepas 2005-01-16 ch 1, | abuseWelcome back to the world of writing and well done. This was a great answer to a challenge. Grissom and Sara were very much in character. I liked the way they talked in methaphors. The ending was nice, very optimistic. I hope this little piece has given you some more ideas to share with us. Post some more soon;-) |
| Lasrevinu 2005-01-16 ch 1, | abuseE! Sara is totally Grissom's addiction. If love had the same physical affect as alcohol, Grissom would've been pulled over for a DUI a long time ago. I loved the subtle metaphors. It was all very poignant. |