 kirahime 2009-11-09 . chapter 2 Ma...NEED MORE STORY! It's just getting good and I |
 FallenAngel Sayu 2008-07-27 . chapter 2=.= i dun c no later chapters 4 dis story =[ sobs |
 MelonSplash 2007-02-12 . chapter 2I don't think that she actually joined Rikkidai, she might be just training them. Please update! |
 i love athrun 2006-08-08 . chapter 2IT IS GOOD BUT DO A NEW CHAPTER! |
 General Iroh 2006-07-10 . chapter 1*keep your fantasies about Ryoma or Tezuka or Fuji or Eiji or any other Prince of Tennis character to yourself.
*Good fic has plot, tension and good writing. Your fic has none.
*you owe me a new computer screen because I vomited on it.
*don't ever reproduce. The last thing we need is more Suethors.
*take your filth somewhere else (wait, don't. No one deserves to be terrorized by this)
*Stop wanking to the screencaps of any bishonens shirtless.
*No one cares about your fantasy.
*The genre of people getting sucked onto the Prince of Tennis-verse is old **. It should be avoided at all costs.
*Ryoma does not belong with any form of original character. He belongs with Sakuno or Tomoka or even Horio. Anyone that is a canon character!
*Fantasies are just that-fantasies. If you want to fantasize yourself in the Prince of Tennis-verse -by all means, go ahead. It IS fun. However, keep it to yourself, and your notebook and/or sketchbook.
*The only people who review your story are your little sockpuppet Suethor friends. You are not taken seriously by anyone else. Keep your fantasies to your little cliques.
*Learn from this list. It is designed to help you. Yes, it is brutal but the truth hurts, sweetie.
And last but certainly not least...may Sanada use you for target practice. |
 A.C.Y.P. 2006-05-24 . chapter 2Nice, not bad, but if I have a suggestion to make, it would be to not make it seem as though she's all High and Mighty (AKA too good at everything). Every character needs a weakness, or something bad about them, which can also be turned into something humourous! ^^. Keep up the good work, gambatte. |
 White Alchemist Taya 2006-04-13 . chapter 2guys can sometimes be **...
this is great!
update soon! |
 Undine1 2006-04-13 . chapter 2wow..Azuki's a mysterious person..i was a little confused when i found out that she trained almost every school [no i feel sorry for the betrayal..ahh if only she plays tennis!i'm looking forward to the next chapter!there's so much about her i want to know =D |
 Craze Izumi 2006-04-13 . chapter 2Now I'm just curious about Azuki and the Rikkaidai... |
 Eien no Kaze 2005-04-17 . chapter 1I like it! Plz update!! |
 Ai Ling 2005-01-17 . chapter 1 It's a good idea and I'd love to see where it's going. You do realize now you're going to have to explain how she knows Sengoku and Yukimura (Seichi, not Seichirou) and what she's doing training the other side ... :) |
 Baka Tori Atam 2005-01-16 . chapter 1 Hehe, I'm too lazy to log in. Sorry. Anyway, it's really good so far. I hope you coninue on and update often. Good luck! |
 SuzieQT 2005-01-16 . chapter 1humm...in-ter-est-ing...I cant wait to learn more about Azuki and her skills at tennis and why all these other tennis players like her. but, Great start! |
 Sylindara 2005-01-16 . chapter 1 How is it possible for her to join the Seigaku boy's tennis club? Isn't there one for girl's? I'm sure there is, it's the one Sakuno's in. And how is it that she's in the Rikkaidai boy's tennis club? Please answer my questions! |
 Craze 2005-01-16 . chapter 1 Does this Sohma related to the Sohma (Furuba)? Is there any pairing, why she seem so sad about joining the Seigaku? |