Omg! One of the shortest fanfictions I have ever read, and yet, it's one of the most heart-wretching! I cried and cried and cried to the point where I got mad at myself, because the tears were getting in the way of my reading. (Laughs) You are one of the best writers on my list so far! The whole plot was nicely done and plausible. You writing technique is very professional, too! I am so happy that I have come across this lovely fanfiction! Kudos to you! You have my admiration. Hahaha. :]

I don't have much time to read your story...so I copied it all down on a word document...I will give you my review for all the chapters that I have read when I have read them.

just to let you know :-P

XD wow ! what a wonderful story:D can't wait to read the sequel!

Wow! and Again Wow! Great story, very well written. I'm not a big fan of angst but this was well done and left at least the option of a happy future for the two. Wolud love to read the original ending also. kagome1571(at)yahoo(dot)com or pculp71(at)peoplepc(dot)com.

It's a good history ! I very cried all a long chapter ! Poor Shuichi ! I go to read the next chapter !

Could you please send me the happy ending?
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Thank you!!
I love the story by the way XD

Great story! Thanks for sharing it.

That was a good story. I'm so drugged up on medicine at the moment but I really wanted to finish this fic. XD Can't wait to read the next installment ^-^

o.o -tears well up- God I'm so close to crying!! ;-; -wipes tears- and it's only the first chapter!! D:

i really thought you were going to kill Shuichi...but you didn't! Yay! Most stories I read that are like this they kill Shuichi...but you didn't! Good job! 5 stars!

Yeah...this is depressing...but really good. You capture emotions perfectly. It's definetely a great piece of work. Love it!

That...was...sad.
Good thing I have tissues in this room, because I'm crying. I feel so bad for Shuichi...how could Yuki do that to him? But at least he cares...I think.

Anyway, good start! Really depressing though...

Oh god that was...emo? To say the least. But, me, being the weird person I am loved it haha. Lovely read- great job

I want the real end of this story please !

oh god, I'm still crying. that was MARVELOUS(ly sad). I'm going to read the sequel!