this was really good.

loved it

love it!

Ha Ha.I love the ending of this one.It made me laugh.

ITA with all the reviewers who said this was in character - it was. And I liked Cath and Warrick stumbling on them, that added to the fic a lot! Really good fic! I love short fics that are well written.

Lovely, just lovely - if you only wrote for the show! Tender, delicate, and yet very much in character - great job!

what a lovely story this is:) you can't stop here please continue

Wow, such a beautifully written and vivid piece of work that literally had me grinning ear to ear like a Cheshire cat as Gris and Sara finally did kiss.

Ah, I'm just a big old romantic at heart, and your story was just the thing I needed to perk me up today. Great work :)

- SS

haha, i love the ending, so sweet.

Wow! That was probably one of the most realistic GSR stories I've read in a long...ever. GREAT job! :)

Aw...

*relishes in warm fuzzies*

*also enjoying watching Warrick squirm*

Heehee...

This was really well written. It's so heard envisioning Gris dropping those reinforced walls long enough to let himself go like that.

What will be even more humorous to envision is Gris and Sara telling Ecklie to blow his opinions out his ass.

*snort*

Well done.

-}-@

Krys

Beautiful.

I really liked this. You kept them enough in character that I could believe that it might just happen that way. Very nice job.

That was VERY well done, darling.

The last sentence was a great little...staccato.

I loved this. It is certainly something I would like to see on TV. Well done! Keep it up;-)

After "Snakes", I had imagined all the different possibilities there could be for Grissom and Sara getting together. None of them seemed possible, and all of them seemed terribly out of character for the two geeks.

The being said, I swear to God that this would fit perfectly into the CSI world. Are you sure you don't write for them? :P I can see this so vividly, even to the Cath and Warrick stumbling upon the sight. I'm amazed. This is exactly what I needed to wrap up the talk. Yes, if you worked for the powers that be, this would definitely proved in-character enough to make the final cut. You're a genius. :)