This was a great short fic. I really enjoyed the imagery. It was very thought provoking! Great job!

/Lovely/ writing. I love the characterisation and the subtlety. I'd love to see more from you!

Am I reading this wrong or is this post-Hughes? It's beautiful in its simplicity. And very close to their characterisations.

Perfect description of their relationship. You did a very nice job.

I wondered about Hawkeye and Mustang's relationship...I thought there was something more to it, but the anime never really revealed anything. I think I prefer when it is spelled out for me! FMA was a great show! I think I liked best when Mustang was going to use his fire powers and Hawkeye stops him bc its raining and its useless. I dont think I ever laughed so hard in my life!

An extremely good story. There's tension between Roy and Riza, vivid description, and good characterization. I like the metaphor of a puzzle, as well; usually it's overdone, but you made it fit anyway.

Well done!

Oh wow. That was amazing. I loved how you created such a vivid scenero between them. Great Job.