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| October Sky 2005-08-30 ch 2,  | abuseI like it! But that scene in the attic was so much like "Babble On" it was creepy! |
| sarah 2005-08-29 ch 12, anon. | abusevery clever twist |
| Helen Pattskyn 2005-07-09 ch 7, | abuseVery nice plot building - I'm looking forward to reading more! |
| Anano Miss 2005-05-11 ch 7, anon. | abuseOh, please keep going. It's getting good now. I'm hanging on your words. |
| Bossmare 2005-02-03 ch 5, | abuseWolfver, excellent work so far. Stiilson chasing a skirt is right in the character. This might be his swan song though we've all heard that before. |
| Endurwen-Knight of Sarmatia 2005-01-31 ch 6, | abuseOh this is good. I do have one idea but the more I think about it the weirder it seams. Why not have Jhonny tell Laura about Stillson and his vision. She sounds like a good person to let in on it. |
| Endurwen-Knight of Sarmatia 2005-01-30 ch 4, | abuseThis is good! Please update soon! |
| Bossmare 2005-01-27 ch 4, | abuseThis is Good so far. I really like it because In my Stories Sarah believed that My character A Texas Ranger, was dead too. But this kid I know too well. The DEA boys missed something on that one. When it's done submitt it for season 4 screen plays. BOSS MARE |
| Sky Pad 2005-01-23 ch 4, | abuseNice chapter, more soon please :) |
| bree1387 2005-01-19 ch 2, | abuseThis is really good so far. The characters are realistic and you're not overly descriptive. I'm looking forward to seeing where this goes. Megan |
| Sky Pad 2005-01-17 ch 2, | abusemore soon please :) |