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Alana-kittychan
2008-09-26 . chapter 10
Alana: nice fic ^_^
Josh Ragland
2008-05-27 . chapter 10
this book is awesome! you need to get this to cartoon network and they could make a movie ! I give it 5 stars great work keep writng books and short stories!
Sailor Nibaru
2008-04-26 . chapter 10
I just finished it, and my god, this is brilliant! I love the tension.. everything!
Yugigirl88
2007-07-02 . chapter 10
AWESOME!! I READ THE WHOLE THING AND AND...I JUST LOVE IT!! WORDS CANNOT EXPRESS THIS! I wear glasses too and never imagined terrence with glasses. But thx! This is AWESOME AND SWEET! I wish you could do a sequel.
IVIaedhros
2007-06-08 . chapter 10
Heartwarming to say the least. Very enjoyable and I'm sorry that it won't be continued.
Karate Tentacles
2006-07-25 . chapter 10
I wanted to wait 'til I read the whole thing to reveiw.

That was GREAT! I loved it! Honestly. You've made me really think about Terrence's character. -faves-
Terrence Fan
2006-06-03 . chapter 1
I can't believe I NEVER commented on this fanfic! *slaps herself*

When I first read it, I felt so sorry for Terrence and all the trouble he was going through. The end, with Terr and Mac, was kinda cute, though I did feel bad that Terrence failed. Bloo acted all jealous! XD If only I possessed half the writing talent you have... D:

*adds story to favorites*
Xaldin Horaz
2006-02-22 . chapter 10
Whatever I had said about Terrence in the past, if it was mean or inappropriate, man, I take it back!

I am SO sorry!

Terrence
Nightglider
2005-11-28 . chapter 10
...this story is sad, and touching.

...UPDATE! >_>
Goddess of Unfinished Projects
2005-10-03 . chapter 10
OMG Sparks, you made me love Terrence. Thank you for making him a good guy . . . a believable good guy. You did an awesome job! Reminds me of my brother . . . strike that, my brother never got better (lol).
Seriously though, this is an excellently written story. You really got inside his head.
Though I must admit I experienced a guilty pleasure while reading Bloo's methods of Terrence torture.
BTW, I'm iceiblue. The one who offered to make you the animated Terrence icon. Just thought you'd like to know!
Grand High Idol
2005-08-13 . chapter 6
Wow...I am REALLY liking this story so far. =) Well written, plus it's Terrence-centric--yay! For awhile I thought I was the only Terrence fan on but I guess I was wrong. ^^;

Also, thank you for the review on Second Chance--it was well-appreciated. ^^
TrudiRose
2005-07-09 . chapter 10
That was a very sweet story. I liked it a lot!
TrudiRose
2005-07-09 . chapter 9
I really feel for the mother in this chapter. It's very hard to see your kids with problems and lack of friends and not be able to do anything about it. This was very realistic.
TrudiRose
2005-07-09 . chapter 6
Way to go, Terrence's mom! I was cheering. :) Great chapter!
TrudiRose
2005-07-09 . chapter 5
Aw! I hope Terrence's mom will explain to the teacher about his glasses. I like the realism of this chapter - that he's able to do some subjects with better eyesight, but others are complicated. If you don't know geometry, seeing better won't magically put it into your head. And I like the realism of the teachers: some are pleased that he's doing better and willing to give him a chance and encourage him, while others are just too locked into their negative view of him. Excellent.
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