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~**~Ginny~**~
2005-08-09 . chapter 7
'Ello Moseph! I wish I had time for a reealy long review of all of the chapters, but I don't. Once again I'm on a bloody library compy and those seem to be timed. Who knew?
I did. There's a time box in the corner. And you only have 11 minutes left.-Aaron
Aaron... Why is it you must invade all of my reviews?
Because I can. And I enjoy harassing ppl.-Aaron
Your not funny. So, Moseph, you did a great job on this story! Ah, my usual line.
You say that way to much. leave the poor girl alone. She JUST UPDATED FOR GOD'S SAKE!-Aaron
Sorry, Moseph. I didn't mean to be pushy. ::sighs:: Okay. You can never update this story again if you don;t want to. But I wish you would. ::sighs dramatically:: Ugh. Ashley. is. on. IM. She. IMed. Me. She. Needs. To. Die.
I. Hate. It. When. You. Talk. Like. This.-Aaron
You mock me! Evil boy. I'm gonna go lock him up in the library's closet. Okay? TTYL!
O! As to what you said in your shout out: I guess I could read New York Is Calling Me. Is that the title? I dunno. I forgot.
Weren't you going to lock me up in a closet?-Aaron
Oh, yeah. That. ::pulls Auburn hair into a ponytail:: I'm going to do that later... or maybe I will let it slide this time... Hm...
::whispers::Let it slide.-Aaron
Fine. But only because your cute.
Okay, works for me.-Aaron

~**~Take the boat and swear to me never to tell the secret you know of the angel in hell.-Phantom~**~
Pidge
2005-08-06 . chapter 7
*small dramatic tear*

*large dramatic removal tear*

I shall overcome. And some day, someday...

I don't know where I was going with that. Can you say mental block.

It was good while it lasted. Ah.

Whoa. There's a piece of paper next to me here at this desk (public library) with some weird things on it in messy writing.

"garden gloves"

"conditioner"

"tongue shrinker"

AH! SOMEWHERE IN THE LIBRARY THERE'S A PERSON WITHA LARGE TONGUE, DRY HAIR, AND DIRTY FINGERNAILS FROM A LACK OF GARDEN GLOVES!

I'll be on the lookout. Till then, adieu!

And I'll be on the lookout for some moseph fics.

~ Pidge
suprise2432
2005-08-02 . chapter 7
*sobs*

*looks at the newly-deemed manwhore named Jack*

yay.

but i'm still upset
Oxymoronic Alliteration
2005-08-02 . chapter 7
Well, I'm sorry to see it's being stopped. If you ever start it up again, you have permission to use my character!
LyxnLion
2005-06-17 . chapter 5
Hey, this made my day! Not only a Davidfic, who I think is undeniably looked over and makes me giddy, but Bye Bye Bridie too! Some years ago I too was among the nameless girl bridage swooning to the most pompous jerk in school, aka Conrade Birdie. This story is reminding of how much fun I had! I can't believe how many lines I still remember. And Wicked! I saw Wicked on broadway last summer and it was FANTASTIC! Really, really loved it. So kudos for your references! Makes me smile. Keep up the good work.
andthenyouwokeup
2005-04-10 . chapter 6
...
AH!
It's my birthday! I come back from a forced vacation (the parents say I spent too much time on my stories. I say...at least I'm interested in something, they said they don't care. But it was all worth it today because I woke up this morning and a CAR was waiting for me! I'll either name it Baby or Spot. I REALLY can't decide) ANYWAY I come back and a new chapter of BBK and MY BIRTHDAY FIC ARE HERE!
I squealed. I really did. Then I ran up to my mom and told her that my good friend Moseph made me a birthday fic...
MOM: Oh? that's great...
Me: I don't think you understand--
MOM: Who's "Moseph" Ash?
Me: A girl I know from
MOM: And you're trying to convince us you're NOT obsessed?
Me: Well I--
MOM: Maybe this isn't a girl at all, maybe it's a 40 year old man getting his kicks writing fanfiction about teenage girls.
Me:...well...I'm gona go read now...
MOM: You do that.
that's what happened. Thought you'd like to know. lol
I let one of my friends borrow my Newsie VHS and I think I've created a monster. lol
My desktop is now Spot...
(can you tell I'm rushing to get to my birthday fic??)
Jersey gets a lot of crap over being dirty and polluted and stuck in the 80s with all the girls having HUGE hair--but that's all because them New Yorkers move down here to get out of the city!
(PS I LOVE NY)
I am going through withdrawl. I haven't seen the OC in 3 weeks. AH INNER TURMOIL!
We talked about Indo-China in US History 2! Somebody said it and my head popped up and then the conversation was too boring so I went back to doodling...
Yay for Napoleon Dynamite! I made my friend Chris watched it and he nearly beat me to death for it lol it's either REALLY stupid or REALLY funny, I guess.
I haven't seen too many shows. I've seen Phantom 3 times, I'm seeing Wicked in July, I saw Seussical because I was OBSESSED with Aaron Carter, Thorougly Modern Millie was GREAT and I saw Children of Eden off Broadway--that was probably my favorite.
okay *goes to read*
SQUE HONESTLY SINCERE!
Poor Race!
Albert!Davey and Conrad!Jack are the PERFECT pair. Dave being the responsible agent and Jack being...well...Jack...
alright I'm done. MOVING ON!
*goes and read BDAY FIC and writes Moseph-meeting-Dave for OTD*
Ash
TheAngryPrincess13
2005-04-09 . chapter 6
awesome...Rock On!
Dreamless_Mermaid
2005-04-07 . chapter 6
What up, yo? Haven't seen this story in a while, I'm glad you updated! Now on to story/review...

Hehehe this was cute! YAY FOR THE PELVIC THRUST! PELVIC THRUST FOR LIFE! WOOT WOOT! *^_^* Great chapter! I would review more, but I'm really hungry and my food just got here so I will leave you with this:

UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE SON! ((strikes pose))

~*Hollywood*~
Janers
2005-04-06 . chapter 6
Yay, another chapter! Okay, so about KONY... A) it wasnt working, but I was gonna leave it up and come back to it when reinspiration hit, unitl B) freaking DELETED IT... gr. I have a new newsies one up though, if that's any consolation... But back to the reviewing. Super duper, can't wait for more!!
Pidge
2005-04-06 . chapter 6
Wicked Countdown- SEVEN DAYS!

E!

Ahem. Now that that's over...

" Just when you thought it was safe to read fanfiction again..."

ha! That's an extremly quotable quote.

Lucky monkey, with a school that DOES stuff. The most exciting at my school is "Survivour". Today was the food challenge. See Grade 12s eawst whole onions! See Wooley barf mustard brownies! Wo!

I'm QUITE jealous. I should have auditioned for the arts school in my area. Oh well. Moment of Envy over. But I wouldn't mind staying green. ^^

I like SweatySingerHipThrustin'!Jack. Bring him back, please. M... I could get used to that.

The thing I love about this fic is the dialogue, espicially random-crowd-noise.

"Mother, you can’t stay here! The crowd will crush you! I’m taking you home!"

"Shut up and keep pushing that wheel chair!"

keep it up, kid!

~ la Pidge
PS- good news in my life! i won me a medal for a duet!
Elphie
2005-04-05 . chapter 6
((steals poster and hugs it to chest))

Dude, you saw Wicked... I think I can hate you too! LoL. But I'll see it with Steph Block.. o-oh!... and in newyork! and littlewomen (hopefully sutton will still be there). and... yeah. booya...

jack's a man whore... hahah.

LOVED this chapter! hehehe ((imagines dnacing jack) ((swoons))
Elphaba
2005-02-27 . chapter 5
((jumps up and down)) I KNOW! RENT... MAUREEN! ((jumps up and down)) I knew it! Now I have TWO Jack Kelly posters! Yay!

You really should ask harder questions my dear. lol.

Omg, I saw the Producers in London (thats why it ttook me so long to review. Not because I saw the producers, because I was in london)) Flipin' rocked.

This chapter, darlingest, was far to short!

Jack's thoughts of grinning is hilarious. 'He smiled like he got laid...' (giggles)

Am I a good cast for Helen? Yay. My sister just saw Bye Bye Birdie at a local theater 'cause her friend was Ursula, but she said that she hated it. Not the story or anything, just the people who put it on weren't all that great. ((shrug)) We're renting the movie though. And the producers (the musical's becoming a movie as well)... yeah. lol.

Great chapter~

-Elphie
TheAngryPrincess13
2005-02-25 . chapter 5
HI...Umm..Rent and Maureen? My mom has that musical...She made me watch it...lol...Update Soon!
Pidge
2005-02-23 . chapter 5
Oh, my gosh!

It's Back!

yeah!

Oh I know the answer too. Rent, as Maureen! ! *sings* Take me or leave me!

I'm so excited for Wicked! ! I have tickets, but not until April.

LOL I'm not a Northerner, I'm in the Good Ole GTA. I swear, the province is turning into the GTA. But that makes us all closer to the theater district, so it can't be that bad.

Good chapter. Short, as you said, but good. I particularly enjoyed " I've already had several headaches. And a nosebleed!" I wish the community theatres/schools would do B. Sheesh, my school isn't even doing a play this year. WE HAVEN'T HAD A MUSiCAL IN THREE YEARS! GAH!

*simmers quietly*

stupid.. *mutter*... gah...

no. happy thoughts.
Oh my goodness, your musicals MP3 thing reads like my cd case! Except Avenue Q, i don't have that (yet) I got Wicked about two weeks ago and it's barely ever not playing. *grin* I like Boq's big "moment" in Dancing Through Life. It's so oddly appealling, like.. like... I'm not sure how to describe it. My brother officially despises my cd player now, since it steals his sleep. however. he does want " The Telephone Hour" on a cd so I'm doing to the good work. spreading the gospel of b-way!

I have to fly, but updateupdateupdate!

~! Pidge!
Dreamless-Mermaid
2005-02-22 . chapter 5
WOOT! Great chapter! I'm working on that V-Day fic, it's coming along I promise. HEY! You spell "favorite" the British way too! Ah, we took a test today, like the whole school, and in some reading sections they had favourite and theatre as "favorite" and "theater" and I was like ((twitch twitch)) want...to...change...AGH! LOL. It makes me shudder the way those are spelled the American way. Heh. I'm too used to spelling it the British way.

ANYWAY, OH! I can answer the bonuses...let's see...Idina made her stage debut in RENT and the role she played in the movie version is Maureen. I'm a RENThead, what can I say? Actually, on the second one, I'm not all THAT sure, but that's who she played on Broadway so I'm only assuming she'll be playing the same character in the movie...MAN, I CAN'T WAIT FOR THAT! I'm so excited.

Okay, back to the story. It was awesome! Very funny and cute. I better go, I'll talk to you later. LOVE YA!

~*Hollywood*~
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