I like this view of drow. Most stories involving drow cast them as black and white, were you're a goody-two shoes or a satanic psychopath.

Your view certainly makes it much more interesting.

I just have one question.

If Ti’erlfein is just a "mask", is the Matron also just a mask?

I lied, I have another question.

Will you write more stories about drow?

I've read many drow fics, only 2-3 are really good, yours is one of them, definitely I'll check your other stories. Finally thanks for sharing you novels with us.

Wow. That was an extremely interesting, culture filled, and meaningful chapter. I thought it would end, and it kept on going. Not neccessarily a bad thing, but to someone acclimated to typical online chapter length, it was dizzying.
You made my heart wrench a few times in the part with Zaknafein, Jarlaxle, Vierna, and Caomh. It really hurts that Vierna changed, now.
Gods...I hate drow culture. *closes eyes in pain*
But this is excellent writing. You know, by now you are one of the classic greats of the genre? You are. -

The short of it, damned good story!

BTW Anya, added you to my fav list. thanks again! (after reading this story two times in a row)

Wowweee! *is aware that no one says that anymore* That story was reallly good. I can't really say any more, but its really good. Oh, thanks for the translations at the bottom...was getting tired of looking through my drow dictionary.

YAY! It has been completed! I now call for a sequel (only if you're willing of course) I really loved the way this turned out!

*snirk* you, my dear, are brilliant. *snickersnort* have you ever considered

writing slash? *sigh* it seems like no one in this genre writes it. *sniffle*

I've been searching my whole life for a Drizzt/Entreri fic. Why, you ask,

don't I write one myself? Because it just wouldn't be the same! I can't very well

read my own work for entertainment can I? -.- Not really. I don't often run

ideas by people though, they get all prickly and mean. ;_; Don't take it

personally if I've offended you. - Lotsa people get all...mean...when I bring

up slash, because it offends their delicate sensibilities. ;B I love it though...

I'm done with my pointlessly rambling review now. _ aren't you glad? LoL

Wow! This is my favorite fic! (Along with Mystery Dark Elf Theatre 3000 of course!) I signed in just so I could give you a signed review. Keep going! I beg! *gets down on knees and pouts* Please! I can't wait! I'm in suspense! What happens next! Keep going with this story!

Very interesting concept, fairly well-written. I hope the author writes a sequel chapter, because the story was good enough to get me interested in the fate of the characters and the resolution of the plot. I would give the story a 7 out of 10, and a 9 out of 10 compared to other stories by non-professionals. Good job.

This is very enjoyable and manages to very much keep in the world

created by R.A. Salvatore. Very good job, and a slightly different

type of story. It did get side-tracked a little with the

Zaknafein - Jarlaxle story, but this was enjoyable as well. This

bit could potentially be led into by another manner if the story

were continued.

Hmm. Well, considering the lengths you probably went to to write this fanfiction, I think it's fitting that you get a longer review than "lol kewl fic dude". Mmm. I definitely liked the accurate portrayal of Zaknafein, and the characteristic edginess of all drow. You have a gift for dialogue, as well. No small claim. Overall, an intriguing read in an odd genre-fantasy with a Humphrey Bogart twist. Hah...Zak the womanizer. Gotta love it. Anyway, I'd love to see more of your stuff...This story is going on my small favorites list.

good stuff,hope you continue this story

Sweet fic.