huury up with the update

You have a really interesting storyline, believable character development, and impressive fight scenes. I normally skim through fight scenes, but yours are clear and anything but monotonous.

I don't know if you've abandoned this story, but I would certainly like to see more of this if you ever feel like writing it again.

A most excellent story, flawed in only one respect: it's not finished.

This is an interesting story! Any chance you'll update it sometime?

It's a bummer that this fic looks abandoned, because it's pretty good. Your writing is decent and I like the plot. Here's hoping you decide to update!

interesting story idea. I'm already interested, but honestly (not trying to offend or anything) you suck at creating names. The names you chose not only were hard to pronounce, but they were barely asian. The names did not fit in at all with the rest of the names in the Natuto anime...they just seemed like the kind of name a person with no experience at choosing names would name a stock character.

UP DATE THIS SORTY!
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I found this yesterday, while searching for Temari dress up games. Don't ask.
I think this is pretty good keep writing, please?

sniff sniff...no shikatema action yet?? But the story's damn professional!! Got all the details and all!! u got the makings of a professional author!

your chou shika ino chemistry is lame compared to interactions with the sand siblings involved

nothing special ... but i found a few interesting things

One thing i gotta praise you for though, is you make good slight distractions to keep us reading

You really should consider finishing this story it is awsome! and really needs and ending!

hm interesting, i'll read more lata

Really liked it. I love Team 10 and the Sand siblings so this really appeals to me. I think you're way of writing Shikamaru is brilliant, really in chracter. (And he's my favourite so I'm picky about how people write him.)

Just wondering . . . if you were going to update? Becuase that would be great becuase I can't work out what's going on (which I'm assumuing is what you were aiming for) and I'd like to know what happens next.

Awesome story so far! ^^
But if my sources are correct, Temari, Kankuro, and Gaara all have the same mother. And I'd say Kankuro takes more after their father.. Almost identical. Both Kankuro and his father have brown hair, same eye style too. And the same funny looking face. >.<
Temari does a decent amount like their mother, though. Gaara... Is Gaara. He really doesn't look much like either parent. Maybe a tad like his mother, with the eyes. But by hair color, doesn't look like his mom or his dad.
Well, anyways.
Fantastic job and good luck~

From~Kidalanna

This story seems pretty good but a bit inacurrate about who the Sand Siblings' parents are. They all had the same mom and Kankuro is the one who looks most like his dad, not Gaara. What's up with you not updating in like 2 years, I mean come on.