truly fantastic.
you honestyl had me captivated from the very first chapter all the way until the end. i loved your style and the characterizations were so much closer than any i've read before, if not spot-on.
i enjoyed this every step of the way and look forward to reading more of your works.

That was an absolutely stunning story.

You handled the characters and interactions so well. The angst was amazing, and the whole thing read like an episode of the series, only perhaps better, what with the introspection and all. Great story, great plot, great twists.

I don't usually read het, but this has me convinced I should start. It was truly wonderful, I sped right through it. An absolute favourite.

I hope you write more wonderful fic like this :D

Oh, lordie - it's almost 3am and I have to work tomorrow, er, today, but I just couldn't stop reading this until I finished the whole thing. Fantastic plot, the raw emotions, the pain and suffering, the reality of the whole thing - what a mind-blowing story. Please go lock yourself in a closet somewhere and keep writing!

:D Second time of reading, which has taken me several hours to read both times! Anyhow, great fic :D!

Great story, I am reminded of the old Morgan Kane westerns that was so popular, the storyline usually followed the same rutine: The hero always got hurt and then the bad guys died.

I don't think I can put into words just how damn awesome this story is. Really. I love it.

That was a great story!

yes Tony,what the 'ell 'appenned to ya?

This has got to be one of my all time favorite stories! I wish they would make an episode out of this! You're an incredible writer! Keep up the great work!

Wonderful story! Very well written and unique!

Wow this story had me gripped from start to finish. So much happened it's impossible to put down everything I liked! The plot was great and very suspensful, characterisation was spot on. The imagery of each chapter was great - I could really picture each scene. Dialogue was clear and believable. The team element was fab along with the whump - and loved the ending, nice to end on a light note.
In some ways I'm glad I read this when it was complete as I don't know if I could have stood the cliff hangers - but now I definately need to sleep!!

Thank you for the great story.

Really great story. I'm glad I found it

This is soo good so intriging, like watching an episode!

Love it!
happy writing
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denmark

Good Lord there was a lot of Tony whumpage! And I LOVED eery freakin minute of it! This story was absouletly amazing!!

Really enjoyed this story. Excellent job keeping them in character. I love the Tony-centred stories, especially when there's plenty of angst and Gibbs-caring. Loving forward to seeing more from you!