Reviews for Hero of Eternity

Reviews For: Hero of Eternity

Hakan Jataru Kurohi 2007-05-27 ch 1,	abuse10 10 don't know don't care
BrokenSilverSoul 2007-01-05 ch 1,	abuseOh wow, I didn't review this already... SUP! Haven't heard from you in a while. I just got cheered up by restarting yet another story and getting three reviews on it! Now I can do another chapter... Anyway, enough about me. I'd say this is a pretty good start, really. The grammar needs a bit of work and a little of the punctuation needs to be checked but other than that I'd say great job, as usual ^__~ 7/10 I enjoyed reading about Link and the personality you gave Shadow. It's a little strange to think that Link would not be a little upset that Shadow has taken over his job, but perhaps you've alluded to that in another fic I haven't gotten around to. I'm interested in the journeys Link made as well, and I would like for you to continue this when you have time. I need some plot pointers, anyway, hehe. Yet again, great job. The fight between Link and Volvagia could have used a little more work to authenticate the battle, but it's still an awesome beginning. 9/10 Of course, it's no surprise I like Shadow, but I'm a little disappointed in this version. I would see you writing about DL as being much more of a spit-fire than somebody who'd praise his counterpart. Haha, I'll be ORIGINAL and say I like this version of Ganondorf. He has more personality. I can tell there will be more to him later, if you continue. Well, how have you been otherwise? Not much has been happening with me, really. Just living day to day, I suppose. Anyway, I hope you continue this story and I will be sure to keep up with it. If not, that's fine, but I'm sure lots of your fans will be disappointed. Until Laturz, ~BrokenSilverSoul
God of demise 2006-06-26 ch 1, anon.	abuseexcellent right more right Know one question if Zelda, Mido, King Zora and Darunia where at Hyrule Castle where is Ganon's HQ?
Redleef 2005-09-15 ch 1,	abuseAw man! That is so cool! Dark Link is FINALLY a good guy! Major coolness! Keep going!
antienoftheshadows 2005-08-01 ch 1,	abuseI enjoyed the first chapter., WRITE MORE NOW!
The Karlminion 2005-01-22 ch 1,	abuseQuestions, questions. You're an impatient one, my good maniac. Hmmph, very well... 1. 10. It is incredibly interesting, as is most of that which concerns the Legends of Zelda. But read on... 2. 8. There were a couple of slight grammar errors, and over all it is rather hard to follow; your transitions... don't really transit well. You need more detail in between major events. Don't be afraid to sacrifice brevity for detail; you'll avoid confusion that way. 3. You ripped away the events from Majora's Mask, the two GBC Oracle games, and what appears to be Link's Awakening. You made an utter mockery out of the accepted timelines and histories of the Zelda universe in doing so. And all this to turn Link into some sort of Gary-Stu. Shame on you, my good maniac! 4. I like Shadow better, simply because he is more believable. Really, my good maniac. I'm ashamed. Link isn't supposed to be a Mary-Sue, or Gary-Stu, or whatever you call god-like, overpowered characters. It just isn't done!! Only you, I reckon... only you... Overall: You've butchered things and made mockeries of other things. And yet... I like it. Tone down Link in the future, ok? -=this be The Karlminion, and he be signin' off=-
BUTTEREDROSIE 2005-01-19 ch 1,	abuseok, you want review, you got review! I like link more than shadow, and I always will because he's our adorable, classic, never-fails link! As to how well writen the fic is, I have been reading your fanfics for over 1 year and have noticed that as time goes on, you have become a better and better writer. Please keep writing this fic! HUGGLES LINK
Konran 2005-01-17 ch 1,	abuseTEN! TEN TEN TEN TEN! Erm... Nine. Bulky paragraphs make my brain get just a little woozy... Hmm... You made Link grow up? Became intertwined with Oni Link? I give up... sigh I'm just one pipe short o' a bagpipe, as the Scots may say... Shadow. Bad-good guys are always cool. Why? Cuz they play for niether side, yet even when they loose they seem to win. Kinda like... Forte from Mega Man! Um, just a question that's completely off-topic, do you think I just re-write Boarding House? I really can't tell if I should... Well, please update when you can!
HopefulRage 2005-01-17 ch 1,	abusethe questions you ask are... 1.10 this story is very interesting and you started off really well 2.10 i think this story has alot of discriptive words and good grammer 3.that i don't know because im an idiot, sorry 4.I like both because uh... now they work together and they still are the best in my catigory.

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