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Key to the Night 2008-06-06 ch 1,	abuseI really want to see more of this! I have always been a fan of a Rhapsody Achmed pairing. I can't wait to see where this goes, and your writing style is excellent, I'm sure I'll love the rest of this story!
BelleDayNight 2008-01-30 ch 1,	abuseI love Achmed! Nicely done. He's the reason I read this series...the other characters have a habit of getting on my nerves. It was short and bittersweet and makes me wish you wrote a bit more. But still very nice.
maddie 2007-06-15 ch 1, anon.	abuseAH! Achmed the hekka sarcastic, clever, and sexyest snake out there! Ashe should go eat a poisonous toad and die. Rhapsody needs to get her pretty head out of her ars. I think you got into Achmeds head quite nicely,his train of thought at the end was certainly his.
vincents-loverffall 2007-02-15 ch 1, anon.	abuseIts good. I really like it. It portrays it all really well. The characters are all IC. Great job! :D
Bone White Butterfly 2006-11-03 ch 1,	abuseHeh. Well this is an almost polar opposite take of Gwydion's death compared to mine in Candlelight Lament, but I like it. There's something commendable about your allowing the romantic competition to keep his dignity even as he loses and, well, dies. However, I'm rather certain Rhapsody would never try to kill herself in reaction to her husband's death. In the wedding scene, I recall this moment when the Singer and the Bolg King acknowledge that Gwydion will have this short while but that they have eternity. Still, hey, this is fiction, and you twisted the elements well enough that only nitpickers like myself would even notice, much less care. Thanks for the read, ~B.W. Butterfly
GrayRobes 2006-10-01 ch 1,	abuseWow...blasted those doors right open, didn't you? Achmed is planning on doing something similar to this, from what I remember. It was a nice twist that Ashe dies in a mortal manner, instead of becoming a draconic creature like Llauron. Rhapsody does not strike me, however, as one to attempt suicide. You did okay with that, but there may have been a different way to go.
WildfireDreams 2006-06-21 ch 1,	abuseSweet. Too bad Ashe died, I like him, and Rhapsody, and Achmed. Just recently finnished 'Destiny'.
Kat 2006-02-05 ch 1, anon.	abuseGood start. But Achmed seemed a bit OOC.. maybe it's just me. But you did well.
Ellyn Westbrook 2005-12-01 ch 1, anon.	abuseI love i love it i love it! Please let me know when you get more!
Playfully Pondering Puppies 2005-08-20 ch 1,	abuse"Come, let's go home" What an ending! I really loved that. And I love Achmed. And "Of course I do" Is so perfect! And--YAY! hands a cookie A favorite stories this shall become!
Altaria Artanis 2005-07-10 ch 1,	abuseVery sweet. Is there more? ~~Lady Altaria
Aryanne 2005-06-02 ch 1,	abuseWhat I think? I think I like it.
Reading Redhead 2005-04-20 ch 1,	abuseI really liked this! Short, but realistic. Thanks for not making this one of those "Ashe is out of the picture so therefore Achmed and Rhapsody are immdiately an item" fics. Those just bug me; thanks for the realism. I also appreciate the angst. I think you did a really good job keeping Achmed in character. ~Red
YoginiGal 2005-04-05 ch 1,	abuseGood story. Try writing more to it!
lady-knight2 2005-03-11 ch 1,	abuseI like it. Only thing I want to comment on is Achmed seeming a little OoC at the end. Actually, this reminds me a lot of the fanfic I'm writing right now. Anyways, good job for a first fic.

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