I'm assuming you drakonliy and solain rhyo had a challenge together to write a 30min story about a manilla envelope, a remote control and corneo or something! This was well written, i liked the Reno-Elena banter and stuff.

Hey Reno,

Wow, another shock ending! ^^ I never would've guessed that one. Besides the ending, I really enjoyed your characterization of Elena in this one. I liked all of your narration when she was getting angry at Reno for being... Reno. Very nice.

I also liked Scarlett's last name because it's one letter away from being 'chastity'. ^^ I don't think I need to elaborate on that point. *grins*

*off for another*

~T. pirate

Woah, check out that ending.

Liked that line about Elena being the innocent thumb tied to the grenade. I don't know how you pull off these half-hour challenges, but you do. Scarlet's never stuck to me, but I think I'm starting to really take notice; and I believe that's at least partly due to you.

Jess 0:o)

Reno's got such colorful vocabulary. For a half-hour challenge this was certainly well put together. I was somewhat confused for about a minute after I read the end then I finally understood. Slow...Great job though! :D Adding to favorites.

Also, I made a mistake on that last review of mine. Stupid me misread 3 reviews for 3 chapters so when I finished with chapter 1 I got al "OMG!1one!!" about reading the second...and put that little bit in the review. -_- Oops. Guess I have to wait rather than let my mind get ahead of me.

-Elena Trauma

*whistles* Nice. Definitely one of the better twist-endings I've come across in the last little while... Elena was marvelous throughout, as was the pun on Scarlet's name.
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Chocolates and a birthday card... simple, but terribly effective. I don't think I've ever felt sorry for Scarlet before...
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Cheers, Ren. As always, stellar.
~Sabe.

Whoa!! Yes, that was interesting and nothing like saving the shocking plot twist 'til the very very end!
Keep writing Turks stories! I love 'em and like finding authors who still write them.

M.

I like the dynamic between Elena and Reno, and I love the story as a whole. The ending especially was poignant.

As always, your little details make the fic. From tossing the gloves in to the emotions from Reno and Elena. I really enjoy your by-play and the way the characters are so different from each other. Your last lines are perfect. Great job, as always.