 SnickyPop 2008-07-20 . chapter 6T.T We finally get Sasuke, but so short! wah! |
 InweTiwele 2007-07-21 . chapter 4PLEASE UPDATE! This is so good!! Please continue!! |
 Kuyeng13-The Heart Logos 2007-03-28 . chapter 6OMG>, |
 TheBeingOfEverything 2007-02-22 . chapter 6I love this fic! please update soon! |
 InweTiwele 2007-01-02 . chapter 6Huh...interesting story, I like it. And thus, the plot thickens. I am looking forward to the next chapter. |
 sei mong 2006-11-07 . chapter 6update |
 UchihaHinata2210 2006-10-08 . chapter 6Are you ever gonna update plz its one of the most how should I put this super stories I've ever read plz dont give up on it |
 Meri Kaisla 2006-01-22 . chapter 1I like the way this started! One of the best starts ever. =) |
 SatanStoleMyThrone 2006-01-16 . chapter 6 please update teh awsome ficcy soon! |
 Chaos Harmony 2005-12-22 . chapter 6Great work - I really love where this is going, and Gagami's got to be one of my favorite OCs ever. I look forward to reading more of this. [prays that fic is not dead] |
 MommyRogers 2005-07-05 . chapter 6This is really interesting . . . any romance in the future? |
 Celira 2005-06-26 . chapter 6-blink- I like this story's direction. Very original, despite including Phantom undertones. Which I like. Shall be keeping an eye upon this piece- I look forward to its path. |
 YoungSasuke 2005-06-03 . chapter 6yes! Finally, Sauske shows up! This chapter was amazing. I can't wait until you update. |
 link no miko 2005-06-03 . chapter 6Wai! I heart this chapter and I heart you and I am -so sorry- for taking so long to review! I am bad Hinaji, I am.
But! Ohmygosh your Gai is so heart. He just... He reads as Gai perfectly, and the little things he does just remind me of why I love Gai as much as I do and you portrayed that perfectly. Even though I was confuzzled as to why they were going where they were going, but then again Gai was as well, ne? So it all works out in the end!
And narutally, whore houses are where it's at for information. And that's not sarcasm, because really it makes a lot of sense. Men will say the most random things when they're with a woman, after all, ne?
And I kinda told you this while reading, but one senses a Sasuke!moment. One was not let down. Although this one was probably the only one who was not waiting with baited breath for a certain Sasuke!moment. ^-^x
My one gripe with this chapter: No Gagami. And evil cliffies of doom! Ohmygosh I wanna see the end to the Naruto/Akatsuki/Jiraiya fight like, yesterday. And I wanna know where the little brat has been and why he knew the Tsuchiya family had records of his family--because that's what he's after, ne? Something about the attack, ne? *is so speculating*
And I am making no sense and uh...look over there! *runs*
Thank you for the new chapter! I'm sure I left out tons of stuff I noticed or liked, and heck I might be confusing things, but still! I can't wait for the next one! |
 link no miko 2005-05-29 . chapter 5Wahaha, I have finally caught up! And you thought I wouldn't, didn't you? *eyes*
For the last four chapters, I have this to say: Gagami is love. LOVE. He's wonderful and adorable and I can't tell you exactly why, but I heart him with much heart.
There were many line loves. I showed you one. ^-^x
I wanna know what that memory was Naruto had, and I wanna know like, yesterday. Heck, I just wanna know what's up. I am intri~igued!
And now, onto this chapter!
Ah, but you see, she -does- have undying love for Lee. She just doesn't know it yet. *giggles*
And Sakura is love. I think it takes other fans to make me realise this.
"First or second." That, right there, makes me happy. Because he -isn't- little mister perfect like Sasuke...and it alwasy goes back to Sasuke. But still! I love the fact that he doesn't come out first sometimes. Gagami love, plus one.
Wahaha, the line about punching him and being good to Konohamaru three seconds later makes me giggle in glee. And I don't know why. I really do like Naruto, honest.
I loved that fight. Between Naruto and Neji and how Naruto kinda sorta avenged Hinata. I am not biased, no.
And the dynamics between Gagami and Naruto just, are wonderous. And I wish to see drunk!Gagami someday.
Hmm...thought. *evil grin*
I like the line of clan importance thing here. Like, who leaves first. Because hierarchies are fun like that. And how no one was snarky as Gagami's father passed. Hierarchies are one thing, being a parent is another.
Hahaha, Jiraiya love.
Wah cliffy! You are evil, Fichan! E~evil! I can't wait for the next chapter~!
Thank you for the fic, Fichan! *snuggles* |
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