What!, i loved this story, please write some more please! Please write more of this sotry and updated it soon, it is so good

Please write more chapters!

oh well hope you can fix what ever it is that's wrong and update soon. you did a great job from what I can see. Pixie

I siad i would do it, and i did. one story down, and tons more to go. sry, u probably have no idea what i'm talking about, but it doesn't matter. i really did enjoy this story though, and i can't wait until you update. so please, update soon!

rob

i shall be waiting!

Wow! great story! Please update soon!

I love it. I'm liking the new characters. I am compelled to read on ( "its a good thing" to quote Martha Stewart) the only suggestions/ criticisms that i have are to 1) go a little more in-depth with the events (I'm not sure if that is how fanfics are supposed to work though its a lil more RP so I'm not sure) and 2) there are a lot of things happening so fast (i.e. its like "hi, my name is _, join us!" Can't wait to read next chapter!

:) I like your story. You do a good job writing it, by the way :D

ah good chapter. update soon.

Nice story, Rah. (Ray? Rae? I have no idea -_-')I have no time to talk now so I'll go, but keep up the good work! ttyl

this is a very good story so far. update soon

WOW I LOVE YOUR STROY LOL PLEASE UP DATE REAL SOON

Okay I'll wait.

Hey, great story! I liked the way you did the dream in the first chapter. Also, thanks for putting me on author alert! Hope you update soon!

i understand but try to update after schools out