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Reviews For: The Ten Cent Adventure

Caramelchan
2006-09-22
ch 1,
abuseAw that argument was really horrible for Stella... aww.
em
2005-04-16
ch 1, anon.
abuseLOVE IT! you beautifully captured the paradox that is mac and stella.
The Madhatter2
2005-02-23
ch 1,
abuseI know you posted this over a month ago, but I just had to review this.

I absolutely loved this, especially since I'm becoming a Mac/Stella shipper. :P The beginning scene with someone pinching Stella's butt had me laughing. That is definitely something that happens in NY (it happened to my cousin). My absolutely favorite scene was when Stella tells Mac that she's not a cheap date. I love how in-character you portray them. I am in awe.
trinchardin
2005-02-22
ch 1,
abuseReally enjoy your writing. It's fresh, grammatical, and brutally emotional. Nice introspective look at Stella and her personal relationship with Mac.
Crema De Estrellas
2005-01-25
ch 1,
abuseAww, what a wonderful story. Loved everything about it. They're both so in character and I think you have their relationship down pat. You have an amazing writing style, keep it up!
liz
2005-01-20
ch 1, anon.
abuseloved it! Mac and Stella's relationship is great. Bittersweet, but also hopeful...sequel, please?
LeoDiabla
2005-01-17
ch 1,
abuseRomance, drama, emotion...you got it all. Thanks for sharing!

Keep Rockin'!

Dyl
marginalia
2005-01-17
ch 1,
abuseAdore your take on Mac and Stella's relationship. Good ending.
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