aw... so cute!! I loved it!
And I don't hink your english is bad.. Mine is worse.. xD

whatcha talkin about? this is great! :D very IC, rather lyrical in its description, and heck yeah... tooth-rot sweet hehe i can see this all so clearly in my imagination, that its almost uncanny. this could easily play out in the anime/manga, much to the joy of TsuSoka enthusiasts like myself heehee well done *checks all the boxes immediately*

i hear ya about the lack of reliable muses tho XD my own have been AWOL since, er... what? *checks her stats* GOOD GOD, DECEMBER OF '04?! holy green guacamole, i had no idea that ive been lurking for THAT long... XD heh. unlike you, however, i dont have the luxury of unpublished stuff to fall back on. i write, i post- thats it. geez, scuse me while i faint

*thud*

nothing shameful, that was adorable

No, it wasn't crappy! It was so CUTE!!

... AW!
Ohmigod. That was so... wow, Amazing, I loved it.
It was just so cute, and it wasn't -too cute-, so it seemed stupid and unrealistic... it was nice.

I don't think the ending was -that- bad! Sappy fluff is /always/ good, ne? ;)

It was cute! How can u say it was crappy^^ hehe write more ne?!

*Blush, squeal, clap hands to face and squeal again* Aw~!
Ok, so the ending was a bit... lame? Very cute, but could have done a little better, I think. But... everything else, EVERYTHING! BEAUTIFUL! So cute, so GOOD! Amazingly written, omg, I love it! *sighs in a faint* I wanna write Tsusoka like that! They're such a hard pairing for me to write because there's so much material, so many moods, so MUCH. TOo much diversity, it's overwhelming *sweatdrop* Then again, I'm only just started to write them, and only have known about them for about two months, ... soo ...
I LOVED IT! TOTALLY! SO CUTE, so well written, so in character... love the scenario, that was a great mindburst idead ^^

hun, trsut me, that was definitely not crap. First off, I could read out without stumbling over dozens of errors and it had a point to it. ^__^ ANd I just adore the little TsuzukiHisoka interactions. Thye funny, cute and sweet. Plus, they make me happy, ne? Hehe. Enjoyed that very much. o_O

(laughs) sweetie, that ain't crap. I've seen crap before- this actually has 1) a plot and 2) good grammar and spelling. It was fluff, but not crap. Please refrain from shooting yourself- there are too many other authors who write fluff that IS crap that stubbornly refuse to shoot themselves.

I THOUGHT IT WAS CUTE! However, I can definately relate to you when it comes to you thinking it was crap. I do it all the time! Like, I'll think I've written a story that's really good, next day, I'm all "This is pure, grade A, crap! Why'd I write it!?" Then everyone else claims it's my best one, yet. Fantasticly short and cute, though! Loved it!

^^ Aw... Cute.

Aww, that was so sweet! *bubbles with joy* ^_^

Ya'Know It wasen't as bad as you made it out to be! I rather liked it...

aw... wasn't that sweet! i just hope there are MORE kissing! aw! mwehehehe ;) i really love the way you write, and your already converting me into tsuXhiso supporter! *clings to muraki-sensei for her dear life*