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TalesOfSpike
2005-03-11 . chapter 5
Sorry, it's taken me so long to comment on this. I kinda missed the first bits on LJ, but then zanthinegirl kindly pointed out the story was also available here.

So many bits hit a note as I went through but now I only remember the Casablanca reference (always cool), the bit about White Christmas and hard liquor, well... the whole prologue and the idea of Giles deliberately playing with the Scoobies' heads. "Icing on the cake" indeed.
insipidangst
2005-01-27 . chapter 3
quick, funny and offbeat - 'the winter holiday of your choice'
some minor grammatical adjustments..and your 'filler' is a little flimsy - nevertheless, well done
insipidangst
2005-01-27 . chapter 2
disappointing. you need a beta with a sharp eye - you deserve one.
insipidangst
2005-01-27 . chapter 1
already i'm, intrigued..nice overshadowing, a clean arc.
thank you

(ganya or death!)
zanthinegirl
2005-01-19 . chapter 2
Interesting; season 4 Ganya. Really like this Giles; and am fascinated by this universe. Look forward to seeing where you tke this one!
zanthinegirl
2005-01-18 . chapter 1
ooh- intriguing! I have *no* idea where you're taking this one, but look forward to finding out!
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