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| Tannza 2008-04-19 ch 13, | abuseI love it :) pls write some more soon |
| Matani 2007-02-24 ch 1, | abuseIt has an interesting writing style to it, sort've melancholy really, but the plot is nice and it seems to match. :) |
| Alphamech 2007-02-21 ch 13, | abuseI think you may have put in two different conflicts between the gifted and the naturals and Im slightly confused as to which is the one you intend to continue with. The rest of the chap was great And I hope you update soon. |
| chrono17 2007-02-21 ch 13, | abuseI would say that I absolutely loved it, but the whole two versions of the same part was kinda confusing. I'm not sure which of thge two I would prefer because both have seemingly important information. I am incredibly excited though that based on your summary the main story has barely even begun. That also kind of makes me sad that I have to wait that long, but I assure you I will as long as you keep writing. This chapter was incredible by the way. |
| warriorseadra 2007-02-21 ch 13, | abuseis sin a secret agent for the pure blood that will let them in to set bombs in the sanctuary?? |
| Anthony1 2007-02-21 ch 13, | abuseNice to see another chapter and it was a pretty good one as well. Some interesting stuff happened throughout the chapter and it makes me want to see what'll happen next. Please do your best in updating again soon and until you do, see ya and keep up the good work. |
| genbo 2007-01-18 ch 12, | abusePlease Continue Go Michi hopefully |
| warriorseadra 2006-12-15 ch 12, | abusehave any gifted use there powers for crime them murder rape or anything of the such, or are they to afraid?? |
| Alphamech 2006-12-14 ch 12, | abuseHo boy this is gonna get interesting. The school seems nice if not the class mates. I hope the school is fire proof and pretty much every other element proof for that matter. Update soon. |
| chrono17 2006-12-14 ch 12, | abuseit takes a while for you to update but it is definitly worth it. The story is really good but recently the conversations have gotten a little bit over the top. for instance "Finally I can once again hold my white blossom in my arms." I see what your trying to do but it comes off as more than a little corny. if you tone that down alittle then I would have to say you did another great job though the chapters seem to be getting shorter but oh well. can't wait for the next one. |
| Anthony1 2006-12-14 ch 12, | abuseThis was a nice and simple chapter that I believe helped to set up for what you may do next with this story. Anyways, please do your best in updating again soon. Until next time and have a happy holiday. |
| Alphamech 2006-10-08 ch 11, | abuseTook you long enough to update. But if College or life ingeneral ate you I understand whole-heartedly. This was a pretty good chap if a tad bit short. update soon. |
| chrono17 2006-10-08 ch 11, | abusefirst let me thank you for e-mailing me. this is great, though a little short. I also like the school uniforms, they seem a bit unusual. i'm also really excited that this isn't going to be one of the stories that gets started but is never finished. any who thank you for updating and i can't wait for the next one. |
| warriorseadra 2006-10-07 ch 11, | abusecould he melt theit tires with noone noticing?? what would happen if one of the anti-gifded developed gifted ability's or there children did?? |
| Anthony1 2006-10-07 ch 11, | abuseIt took a long time for this chapter to be put up and even if it was a shorter compared to your previous ones I still liked it. Having this chapter mainly forcus on Tai was a nice move since it gave us somewhat of an insight to what he thought about. Please do your best in updating again soon and utnil then, see ya and keep up the good work. |