Ok, I've read what you've written about the flamers, and I have to agree with you, what they said was stupid and wrong, and they have no rule to tell you what to do or write, because this story is a story that you yourself are allowed to write, and you have the authority to do so.
I have to say though, the characters are very OOC, but it's not bad at all. You did made a few mistakes, but hey, it's alright. Though, it would have made a better story, if it was in text form, because there are many people who do not enjou reading script styled stories.
The story was very funny in a way, though you do have many spelling mistakes, it was still very well done.
I know you are not going to continue this story, but I will have to tell you that if next time some flames you, or insults you in any way, you should not be discouraged by it. In fact, you should keep writing,and prove to them that it's not by their choice if you should write this kind of story or not.
Well, good job on writing this story, and many others! :P

))falls off chair laughing((heeheehahahoho...))deep breath((i have a weird sense of humor...hehe...))points and laughs at Jaken acting like a pizza((

Forever Cheese,Kara

contine i hurt my head becase of lahing

Lol...hilarious...heehee. Messed up and absolutely hilarious!! You must write more! Lmao...can't stop laughing XD

(Covers face with hands) MY EYES! THEY BLED!

(Peeks through fingers) Okay, not really. But this is a seriously messed up fic, but since it was meant to be that way, I'd say it's pretty funny...weird...and wrong on so many levels...but funny.

Keep it up. And bash Kagome a bit if you can. Don't like her much.