Wow, nice poem! Very powerful imagery, love the diction/language used, very good flow within the poem...

Beautiful and meaningful. It's full of things that you have to know in order to understand it. Truly one of the better poems I've seen.

Interesting. I liked the Greek mythology references. Also, I too have thought that maybe her being a princess was more of a curse than blessing. Good job.

Very good and unusual - concerning Usagi (but not so much if you think to the 5th SM manga season, when Three Lights rescue her after her first meeting/fight with Galaxia and Seya is musing about how heavy is the burden of her duties)-. The references about Greek/Latin mythology fit perfectly, and I love G/L mythology too.
Keep writing!

You did a great job. You used a lot of symbolism. I love it when people use symbolism in their poetry. I makes up for me cause i sure can't.

What can I say? It's another great piece and although I don't usually read the poetry (mainly because I'm terrible at understanding) I like it and pretty much get it.. I think.. Anyways I luffs you and your work

Once again, a very beautiful work of art. I have a great appreciation for the things you write - the language you choose is always so eloquent and well-chosen. Please keep writing, so I have more wonderful pieces to read. :) And good job with putting in notes on the poem - you probably would have lost a lot of people near the end, though I happen to have a love for greek/roman mythology. Still, very nice.