Aw, poor Eri. This was good, I really liked it.

I've never listened to the song, but your fic was good. I liked it.
Akina

This is a sad story but it's also really good. I'll stop my review here because I just had a literature class and in the end you'll get a twenty page review. I only do one of those when someone asks!

Ohayo

Great fic!!

this was good not many one shots that have tragety in it are really good andi don't know if someone told u this but a little background info eri and yuka are the gossuppy one that always jump to conclusions and ayame is the one that is laid back more then the other two.ayame is the one that thinks kg and inu should be together.

I liked it and the son sounds good while reading the fic too ^_^

Aww! Poor Eri! That was so sweet and sad! I really like!

Woah...that is really good. I enjoyed it a lot and that's saying something since I don't really enjoy InuYasha. Anyway continue writing since I'd love to check out more of your fanfics soon. I love the compassion here too...so cute ^-^
Mystic ^_-

Very nice. I liked it and I'm glad you lowered the rating to PG-13. I archived this in my C2 archive. Check it out. Thanks.

I ENJOYED THIS CHAPTER PLEASE CONTINUE :p :)

Awesome but I think it could be PG-13, it wasn't like mine...

thay was sad.sweet,of kagome but any true friend would do that right.great job

I've never had a lot of experience with the "rape" situation, but it seems to me that you captured things well from a surface perspective. I've never really listened to the words of the song "Holy Water" I've just heard it in the background at work, but the lyrics seemed to fit into your short well. Good Job.