Hm...I like both, but I also like this one best-the ending.

It's like when you desperately want a couple to be together, but too many things prevent it and that's what you did with SquallRinoa.

That means it's good.

To conclude this: ] Good job.

O That cannot be how it ends... if it is - OH MY GOSH. First of all I have to say you're a great writer because for some reason you had me completely convinced that she was going to save him. And that's hard to do. Normally I can predict endings, even surprise ones. XD I never read the version that you had before this, but whatever it was it probably can NEVER compare to this one. This rewrite turned out amazing! It was extremely tragic, but I still absolutely loved it. Great job!

What happen to the first one? I love this story. I mean...wow. What an ending, i was sitting at the edge of my seat for this one! Wow. GREAT story...but I AM curious to know what happened about the first one.