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| .ghostly.soul.of.a.writer. 2008-05-15 ch 1,  | abuseThat was just so...beautiful! How odd, such a sad little fic and I'm calling it beautiful lol. But I loved both it and the way it was written - great writing ^_^ |
| turquoisewaters 2007-01-15 ch 3, anon. | abusethis story is so intriguing. I nice break from the perfect world naruto fics. |
| Gonrie 2006-11-23 ch 1, | abuseCongradulation...you made me cry. I'm no way near a cry-baby so... That end was beautiful. It would have been bad if you make him reincarnated or something. The sad end was perfect. |
| yue no rei 2006-08-01 ch 3, | abuseyoushi huh? will anything concerning naruto happen i wonder? maybe in spirit or something... |
| yue no rei 2006-08-01 ch 1, | abusedamnit is so sad... |
| DarkvsLight 2006-07-12 ch 3, | abusewell i just have a simple question...what's gonna happen now? I mean...*sniff*..Naruto's dead T_T...is the rest of And Ashes gonna be about Sasuke? |
| Trespasser1307 2006-05-01 ch 3, | abuseAngst, angst, angst. Oh, my. This is by far, this is one of the best angsty fics I've read. It's beautifully written and quite heartbreaking, almost. I was just wondering if this story's done or not; because I really hope that there's a lot more to it. Great job and keep it up! (...even though I was kind of wondering about Sasuke's makeup... eh, well) |
| lark lavroc 2006-02-12 ch 3, | abuseBleak and despairing and incredibly poignant. Your writing is lovely: understated, but with the right amount of detail to hint and imply. I hope more is forthcoming, as I'd love to see how this plays out. The last scene is especially intriguing. |
| Fool0 2006-01-03 ch 1, | abuseWow. Just wow. |
| DarkAngstScary 2005-11-12 ch 3, | abuseWow, depressing. Poor Naruto.. though if he's dead uh.. how is this like yaoi? Oh well... details details. |
| Incomplete-without-you 2005-11-05 ch 3, | abuseupdates soonsish! |
| Matti Carnadine 2005-06-15 ch 3, | abuseWhat a way to start a fic, killing the main character of the series! lol Very emotive chapter, my eyes were filled with tears, besides I was reading it while listening to 'Evergreen'(larc en ciel)... The only weird thing at first was Sasuke using makeup, just the way I use to make up in the morning XD Keep up the good work! |
| kkkkkkkkkk 2005-05-28 ch 3, anon. | abuseHm...I saw this story on Adultfanfiction and thought it was pretty good. Finding it here was a suprise, mostly because you didn't add the first chapter with Naruto asking Sasuke to kill him (that one was my favorite). That's the only chapter that actually has SasuNaru actions in it. Why didn't you post it up here? Also, are you still writing this? I hope so, it doesn't sound completed. Or maybe I just don't want to see it that way. Naruto's dead. but Sasuke seems to think that the demon fox is out for his blood, and I'd liketo see where you were going with that. Another chapter? Please? |
| pcg 2005-04-26 ch 3, | abuseThis has me very intrigued. I love your style, and I really like what's happening plotwise. And like I said previously, I'm intrigued. Can't wait to read what happens next. :) |
| foo 2005-04-06 ch 3, anon. | abuse... confusion. Good, but so much confusion, even after reading the previous story. You better keep writing though, it's the only way I can cure this stupid confusion. |