Hope you continue.

Another great chapter.

Great, but sad.

Are you going to finish this? I like it.

Oh I'm curious as to where are you taking this story!
I really like the Sasuke you portray here, even though I never really liked teh idea of someone as "manly" as Sasuke wearing make up, you somehow have manage to convince me of the funtionality of it for the story

Utterly fantastic. Your penchant for description blew me away. I love the way you set the scenes and the metaphors. The insight into Sasuke restructuring of his character was so fantastic and realistic. A wonderful read. Only wish there was more!

That was just so...beautiful! How odd, such a sad little fic and I'm calling it beautiful lol.
But I loved both it and the way it was written - great writing ^_^

this story is so intriguing. I nice break from the perfect world naruto fics.

Congradulation...you made me cry. I'm no way near a cry-baby so...
That end was beautiful. It would have been bad if you make him reincarnated or something. The sad end was perfect.

youshi huh? will anything concerning naruto happen i wonder? maybe in spirit or something...

damnit is so sad...

well i just have a simple question...what's gonna happen now? I mean...*sniff*..Naruto's dead T_T...is the rest of And Ashes gonna be about Sasuke?

Angst, angst, angst. Oh, my. This is by far, this is one of the best angsty fics I've read. It's beautifully written and quite heartbreaking, almost. I was just wondering if this story's done or not; because I really hope that there's a lot more to it. Great job and keep it up! (...even though I was kind of wondering about Sasuke's makeup... eh, well)

Bleak and despairing and incredibly poignant. Your writing is lovely: understated, but with the right amount of detail to hint and imply. I hope more is forthcoming, as I'd love to see how this plays out. The last scene is especially intriguing.

Wow.

Just wow.