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| long island gone 2008-03-20 ch 1,  | abusei just found this on a favorite list, jay and paige, i never thought out. this was absolutley amazing, simply amazing. |
| xcrazibabii69x 2005-08-10 ch 1, | abusewow. i saw the idiot who reviewed askkin if u were gonna continue. anyway i saw u on my author alert list, but i never read this story. this was amazing. |
| Shelby 2005-02-27 ch 1, anon. | abusewow!! ru gonna continue? |
| xHeAvEnLyx 2005-01-20 ch 1, | abuseat first i so thought that is was Manny! This story is great, keep writing! |
| jimmety 2005-01-19 ch 1, | abuseWow! I absolutely loathe the idea of Jay and Paige together, but you really made it work here. I'm definitely adding this to my 'Favorite Stories' list. Good job! Ms. Doom and Gloom |
| karmakaze 2005-01-19 ch 1, | abuseWow, this was a really good story, but Jay is such an ** for expecting her to have sex with him because she's done it before...when she was raped. Great story:-) |
| Davey-is-Gawd 2005-01-18 ch 1, | abusefor awhile, i was most definitely thinking that it was Manny. but no, alas, it was Paige, who i absolutely adore. |
| Rachel 2005-01-18 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat was an amazing story. You made it all so real. Great job. Please write more like this, i really like it. |
| your heavensent 2005-01-18 ch 1, | abusePaige & Jay are such an interesting couple, but this story makes me enjoy the pairing. I liked it! |
| jenni 2005-01-18 ch 1, anon. | abusewhos the boy that shes with?! |
| Kitty Kat 2005-01-18 ch 1, | abuseThat was so real that it hurt. I'm sitting here, like almost shaking, because it did that to me. I couldn't not review. I don't know... what do I say? Wow. Okay, see, I'm like tearing up now. I have to go or I'll be writing a review and balling at the same time. Touching. |
| Freeing Alys 2005-01-18 ch 1, | abuseThat was pretty good. You wrote it nicely. Before you even said who the charectors were I could guess, you did such a good job portraying them. |
| Maibe Josie 2005-01-18 ch 1, | abusewow...immediately you think Emma, but then you slowly remember that Paige would be the one to act like that, becoming a physical person sexually usually happens when you've been raped, think about Paige during her trial, great job, well written. One shot? if not, i'd leave it as a One Shot because that's the way it seems. You really covered Paige completely and you've written it as though you can end it now, or you could continue if you want. |