 Ima 2008-07-29 . chapter 3This story seems pretty good. This is the 1st Faculty fanfic that I've read and I hope that you keep up the good work. |
 bloodredcherry 2007-11-01 . chapter 5In previous chapters you seem to have implied that Casey is abused and yet his mother is being nice to him, she's not mocking him or being cruel to him or anything. Perhaps in a future revision make sure to make it clear that Casey's parents are against him is just in his head or a reality.
I mean parents are concerned especially if they know their kids are going through a hard time at school. Also that comment about his Mom not wanting to talk to him was incredibly random. That is just my personal opinion though, so take it as you will.
It is an intriguing story, but a bit jumbled. Anyway, I hope you wont take this as a cruel flame but a bit of criticism, I apologize if I hurt your feelings. Because I do plan on reading the rest! |
 bloodredcherry 2007-10-31 . chapter 3This story is good so far. I take it that it's an AU? Where the alien invasion never happened? Anyway - great start so far. His inner voice disturbs me and I have feeling it's just started. |
 Shooting Starlight 2007-02-04 . chapter 12I love this story! Love, love, love. Casey's character (and Grace's for that matter) seem to unravel a little with every chapter, so their bond seems more solid that way. Not much longer now until this story is over... I can't wait to see the ending. Well done! ^o^ |
 Shooting Starlight 2006-09-26 . chapter 11O_O...
First of all, I'm sorry I left it this long to write a review ^^;;, but I finally had enough time to sit down and read it again. =] Now I want more... lol. This story is so perfect to character and the situations that are dealt with feel so very real. =P Poor Casey.. *HUGS*
I can't wait to read more! |
 Geekazoid 2006-08-06 . chapter 1 MORE PLEASE?
:-) it's so good |
 Shooting Starlight 2006-07-25 . chapter 10Aw... >_<
This chapter was probably your longest so far, but honestly I didn't seem to notice. I love your dialogue and the pace too, and there were a lot of times that I went "O". ^0^
I like the idea behind Grace's past, it opens up her character a little more. And I *still* love the idea of these two as a couple, the chemistry is so GREAT! ^__^
Only five chapters left? Poopie. :P |
 Geekazoid 2006-03-07 . chapter 9 I just read both chapters, I want more! |
 Shooting Starlight 2006-02-19 . chapter 9You have no idea how much I'm squeeing right now. ^o^ She kissed him! And he touched the spot... :p This chapter was great, so full of emotion. I actually like the conflict you've got going for these two... it's not an instant attraction. Grace is no Mary-Sue, I'm loving this story more and more! |
 Shooting Starlight 2006-01-25 . chapter 8He knows what. ;)
This was a great follow up to the last chapter. I'm glad that you went with the routine of Casey being all "Ow, it hurt" rather than "Yeah... that felt good", because technically he wouldn't be using it as a remedy JUST yet. I like the crush thing though that he has with Delilah, so that it is like the movie and you haven't got out of proportion just because she is disliked.
Zeke hitting on Grace... KILL KILL. :p |
 British Child 2005-12-16 . chapter 7this was a great chapter! had me really going at the end. I'm looking forward to reading more of this!!
- Lora |
 Geekazoid 2005-12-12 . chapter 1 BRILLIANT! :-) |
 Shooting Starlight 2005-12-11 . chapter 7My God, I had to keep reassuring myself to go on reading this chapter, not because it was bad... but because it was truly frightening. Your dialogue sometimes shocked me to gasp out loud (Frank's lines most of all), it was wonderful! You can really capture emotional outcomes, and drive the audience to their peak. I was chanting in my head for the latter of the chapter "Don't do it, don't do it..."
*applauds* Possibly your best chapter yet. |
 Geekazoid 2005-12-05 . chapter 6 Just to say I love this story! Are you planning on doing an update soon? It's fine if you want to take your time, I have waited longer for chapters. This is too good a story though to pass up. Thanks for the read |
 British Child 2005-11-12 . chapter 6I'm real sorry I forgot to review this..
this was such a good update too! I believe this story is becoming even more interesting with every one.
Keep up the great work!
- Lora |