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Reviews for: The busride
SilkYuzu
2005-08-26 . chapter 1
aw! that was so cute! I really enjoyed it
Luna_Riven
2005-08-20 . chapter 1
^_^ Wow, that's cool! ^_^ And soo funny! Please write another fun Beyblade fic! ^_^ ~Luna
BunnyEmpress
2005-06-23 . chapter 1
Hey! I followed your suggestion and read your work. It was really cute! I enjoyed it a lot. And thank you for reviewing my fic!
JKHSAJKDJ
2005-03-15 . chapter 1
I loved this story to bits ^^ It was short but so sweet, you didn't need a big love scene to make the reader feel mushy.

I'm so happy I dared to look through Fanfiction again, because no matter how many awful OC fics are out there, there are still cute little stories like this one that often get overlooked.

As with the swearing, I imagine Rei saying 'crap' all the time for some reason ^^; I say 'bloody' all the time, so I often imagine Kai saying 'bloody' in front of words! Ehehe...
Noriko Kuro
2005-01-20 . chapter 1
wow...
me like...
me like a lot...
keep it up
kaixRei 4ever
ttfn
^_^
Little-Pearl
2005-01-20 . chapter 1
Oh it's so fluffy! I luv it! It was really nice and I like how you described Rei's phobia. It was really cute! Oh and you must write a sequel, please! *puppy eyes*
Ku-chyan
2005-01-19 . chapter 1
Oi! That was cute! Hell, I would *pay* to see a picture of that! I really liked it, and I hope you write more like it!

Also, about the whole swearing thing...Has everyone who told you stuff like that been from the south? Because I live about as south as south gets in the United States, and I can guarantee that not a single person I know doesn't cuss...a lot. I cuss a lot...A LOT. Especially in real life. So...I mean, I don't want you to think that everyone down south is all stuck up and stuff. You're..Norwegian, right? I was reading your profile. Great choice in music, and anime! But anyway...great story!
~Avalon Hunter
P.S-- I love sleep! It's my hobby!
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