 emeraldeyegurl 3/19/06 . chapter 5hey this was a good story! please write more. I like newsies and back to the future. Well the only newsies i know of is my friend's sis that wrote fan fic on here. but i know the basics of them. keep up the writing. bye. |
 queenfan03 1/10/04 . chapter 5i like it a lot...two of my favorite movies are Newsies and Back to the Future! |
 JLove 2/18/03 . chapter 5Okay, I know you posted this like a year ago but. That was so cool. I was in the Newsies section and I was like 'dum de dum dum dum.' Hey, I spenp all weekend watching Back To the Future so I'll see that section. 'dum de dum du-" WOW! A NEWSIES B2F CROSSOVER! WOW! So I read it and it's great. And It's all true. Except the de dum dum part. |
 AaronLohrLover24 2/18/03 . chapter 5Newsies? lol This was so funny! Very very creative btw to include them lol. Keep the story going, I'm intrigued. If I was going to give you one suggestion, it would be to fix the formatting, it's a little difficult to read and that might put potential readers (and reviewers) off. Oh, also I think you should have Mush make a cameo (at least) lol. PLease! Great job :)
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I LOVE Mush! |
 Kayrie 1/30/03 . chapter 5I like your story, i really do. But the format is left aligned, and not in proper paragraph form. Insert a period before the close of the quoation ["Hi."] You could use spell check, too.
Don't be discouraged. If you edit it enough, it will be a masterpiece. |
 Wild Gunman 9/16/01 . chapter 3Nice, but, about that line of Biff knowing that the time machine is real, how would know it was real in 2015, if had came from the present, unless this is the Biff from the future. Oh well. |
 Mizz Destiny 7/18/01 . chapter 5I Loooove the idea of Marty as a newsie. I can't understand what Doc's doing though. |
 Lara 6/18/01 . chapter 5 Good show. Ok, I've been saying that alot lately since watching Hook last week. Anyways. Good stuff! Keep it coming! |
 G Man 6/5/01 . chapter 4 Wonder Full I loved the newsies! and BTF |
 MusicalCutie16 5/24/01 . chapter 4That was pretty cool. |
 JadeiteZ 5/1/01 . chapter 4Cool! Can't wait for the next chapter! :) |
 Cris 5/1/01 . chapter 4 I never thought to put two and two together the way you have. Interesting story. Are you going to post the next section soon? |
 James Birdsong 4/21/01 . chapter 4 What an interesting story .-. write more chapters I guess |
 Lara 4/12/01 . chapter 4 Emergency? What kind of emergency? -hey wasnt that a line in a movie?...Anyways I wanna read more! |
 Jewelz1 4/10/01 . chapter 1hello everyone. well this is certainly...interesting. Actually, this is suppose to be a BACK TO THE FUTURE fic. I have no idea how it got into the newsie column. If you've seen BTTF, then go on and read, but otherwise I warn you, it won't make any sense. Sorry! |