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Saphira7
2009-11-23 . chapter 39
I'm glad that you could update again. I hope that you can continue to steadily do so as I can't wait for more, especially what happens next, if Buffy will go to the hospital wing or not, and if so if it will be realized that she is the slayer.
dreameralways
2009-11-22 . chapter 39
This is a very entertaining story and I am really enjoying it. For a while I thought that you would make her a Malfoy, but since she had no reaction to his name, Potter, or any other last name, I'm starting to think that the name on the birth certificate that she didn't want anyone to know is either Black or Evans. Unless you plan to make it something more obscure and unknown.
I really hope that at some point Buffy just sucks up her fear of anyone paying too much attention to her and just asks someone to secretly teach her DADA, atleast enough so that she could pass her OWLS. Maybe she could ask Neville or just go ask Hermione since she's supposed to be uber smart and hangs out with someone who's actually had cause to use them.
Can't wait for your next installment.
Thenchick
2009-11-22 . chapter 39
is harry and co. gonna continue to treat buffy like crap?
toastbox
2009-11-22 . chapter 39
Naughty Buffy. Though she was already exhausted and hungry from the grueling training and spell castings, she still ventured into the forest, lured by her Slayer instincts. Hope Buffy gets through this alright. Maybe she'll awake in the hospital wing... brought in by Snape! Lol. Ah, that would be unexpected. Anyways, update soon :)
General Mac
2009-11-22 . chapter 39
talk about leaving it on a cliffhanger more chapters pretty please
enchantedlight
2009-11-22 . chapter 39
great chapter! update soon!
Allen Pitt
2009-11-22 . chapter 39
Hm. Even with slayer healing, this will be tough to conceal, let alone get healed up... And a "oops, fell down the stairs, my bad" excuse likely won't work. She'd have to admit to being in the Forest.
Maybe Camilla could help? ie not just a trainer but could help with healing etc? that's all I've got
Hey--about the letter. Instead of saying there was no letter, how about --there is one, but a large stack of coins fell over when she opened the vault door, it's buried under them, she never saw it? So later when "somebody" says "well why didn't you read the letter?" she can just look blank and say "What letter?"
Nice scene with Snape. Glad to see SOMEONE is suspicious. It is a rather large coincidence. Too bad they alienated her so badly that first summer, now she isn't willing to take a chance on telling them the truth. (Dumbledore wants to trust her? He wants to trust everybody)-- I agree the trio would be highly suspicious--after all almost every year there's been someone who turned out to be working secretly against them.
Tentrees
2009-11-15 . chapter 38
Love the story so far. Well woven and doesn't make anyone ouit as a super-anything (except Buffy who is a KICK ** SLAYER).

Wonder how the Scoobies are doing (other than dispondant, though with Faith there and the center of the fight as it where I hope they can get her head unjuged).

If she does go back to Sunnydale I hope she can help Willow stabalize her magic use.

Again LOVE IT WANT MORE SOON.
Nicholas
2009-11-09 . chapter 38
Hey love your stories. Their fabulous! Hope you will be updating both. Have some spelling edits on things, but feel kinda pretentious doin' it. They are- Vampires Lair not "Layer". And I don't know if the use of "z" in words is the same over there as it is here in America but same with "s" and "c". But its "realize" over here, and "realization" not "realise". And its "practicing" not practising or practice and not practise. Like I said it could be cultural vernacular and diction differences. And sorry im very detailed oriented and to read such stimulating stories and have to my eyes stop at a mistake is a lil' annoying. But is probably all me and not you! But kudos on using the correct forms of center and centre in your sentences. Most don't get the distinction.
Thenchick
2009-10-29 . chapter 38
i wonder who her birth parents are...
and i hate how hermione,harry and ron act towards her.
Saphira7
2009-10-27 . chapter 38
I just read your story, it was really good! I hope that you can update again sometimes soon I really like it and the way that you write. I can't wait to see what happens next and if Harry, Ron, and Hermione come closer to discovering Buffy's secret!
StoryTagger
2009-10-20 . chapter 38
You know...I just realized something rather interesting...All the slayers are related on some level...and Rowena and Camilla are sisters...that means Buffy is related to Rowena...She could stake a claim as the Heir of Ravenclaw...not that she would...Anyways, why is Harry being such a prick? I'm pretty sure his mom would box his ears if she was alive to see how he treated another student...even James would get onto him...seriously though, about Rowena creating a place for Slayers...and the fact she built much of the castle...I wonder if there's spellwork in the walls so that any Slayer could claim sanctuary in Hogwarts...
enchantedlight
2009-10-04 . chapter 38
great chapter! update soon!
General Mac
2009-09-18 . chapter 38
loving the fic more chapters pretty please
toastbox
2009-09-17 . chapter 38
Awesome update :)

And glad there wasnt a letter. It makes more sense ;) But it also adds more suspense to the unsolved mystery: who are Buffy's parents.

Looking forward to the next chapter!
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