I rather liked this, so very suggestive in a marimite way ^~.

You wrote it so beautifully.

You capture the characters, the situation, the "bad sheep" aspect throughout it and the dialogue woven in is just breath-taking. I can't think of a better fic portraying them like such; this just dazzles me to no end. Lovely, lovely, lovely.

[+ fav]

~* Noelle

Needless to say, this piece rules big time.

YAY! I found a Marimite Shoujo ai ficcy XD yata! I'm so happy I can cry now >

short but good. i liked it.

Nice lil fic i've stumbled upon ;] One of them is obviously Sei and im guessin the other one is Youko.
Good work on this and i hope you write more marimite fics. Maybe with the same couple...

I really enjoyed this fic. Nice way of telling it. As far as the pairing, I'm guessing, maybe...Sei and Youko? Not sure. It's tough. Heh, maybe I just wish for more SeixYouko fics.
Anyway, good job. Really liked it. Keep writing.