 Rioni Riishu 2005-01-20 . chapter 1I’m so glad that you continued writing MMZ fiction! If anything, this one is even better than the last. Great job; I hope you keep it coming! It’s interesting to see a version of how Elpizo came to the Resistance; it’s also interesting how you put Phantom in there, implying that perhaps even the Guardians understand that all is not well. Great character development; I look forward to more. |