I love this fic! It was so cute and perfect the first time I read it through, but it was just so awesome when I read again with the song playing! It really goes with the lyrics in the song, and I can imagine it all happening. Great job!

...wow...just, wow...

WHAT? Flaming my cousin was one thing, but making a Trunks/Goten is another! How can you make them gay? I swear, people these days! Hey buddy, you can flame me till the end of time but you don't ever TRY and flame my cousin! Cause I will flame you SO bad it won't even be FUNNY!

Kari

P.S: Lay off my cousin, pick on me instead!

aw kute!
-*-Crowsi-*-

That was good. Really good. I mean, wow. But why was Goten crying? That part confuses me. Maybe I just missed something. I'll read that part over. Anyway, great fic!
Hannah

Ha ha, bet you never expected another review on this ficcy huh? But, unlike a lot of other readers, I search everywhere for good things, and I teel you what, I certainly aint disappointed. This fic was cute, loved it. So hoplessly romantic and sweet. Plus I haven't heard that song in over two years. Fits well with the fic. Wonderful, even though I'm more Metallica and such.

And as for flaming. Why flame? Shounen-ai's the best

AW! that was soooo cute! ;0;!

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that's so sweet.

i luv your story.

wow I really like it, trutens are so cute but this one almost made me cry.

pretty good- sounds really sweet- the song fits well! good writing too

Shounen-ai is cool but yer a total Bitch Lunatik's Toraphim. Fuck you to hell for what you said in the review on the story Chichi.

I speak my mind too and I don't think you have a right to judge like you did...

So kawaii. it's good to know there are other t/g supporters out there as opposed to everyone being t/m or t/p. i luved it. No offence or anything but i hate that song.

oh my maybe I'm just being a girl but that brought tears to my eyes :') I love it!

nice. too bad it was sung, not written. words are much more powerful. words, not lyrics. there was no music, so it appeared as a somewhat empty poem, incomplete. trunks and goten... perhaps they do look good in a white tuxedo.

awwwwwwwwwwwwww! *dies* that was sooooo sweet! *jumps up & down* GREAT job! _!