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-Totally-T3ii3
2006-08-14 . chapter 2
This is wicked awesome. I love what you wrote, you captured Paul so well. =^^= Keep up the good work.
Karisan-karisan
2005-01-27 . chapter 2
hey...nice job here! you really got into Paul's mind! (I don't know why, but I can't do that. I just write things from the surface!). Keep it up!
Thanks for accepting my idea, and thank you so much for the draw. Lee is so cute (I saved it already in my computer!)About his hair, I think it's cool, I mean, we can't guess how it was, but I think you got it right! Thank you so much!
(if only I could draw like that...*sighes*)
Stay well and take care...Kari

P.S:Your pictures are going to be very successful in the future! Oh and thanks again! :D By the way I loved your picutes from Rurouni Kenshin, besides i love Rurouni Kenshin!
MooNTeARZ
2005-01-24 . chapter 2
Hey!! I hate sunday's and i have blonde hair too! LOL, actually, if i was a tekken character, i'd be Steve...anyway, great job! I love it!! It's totally awesome! Honestly though, I like Paul's chapter better then Jin's. At anyrate, don't listen to Su Me girl or whatever her name is. she's just a lame-o and annoying who has way too much freetime on her hands. I mean honestly, if she cares this much about tekken, she needs to go outside and throw a ball around! Anyway, if your interested, you should read my story Angels and Demons! At anyway, great job! It's awesome possum! Oh, and is Steve gonna get a chapter?
Peace out dude,
MooNTeARZ
BrideOnFire
2005-01-20 . chapter 1
Shrike -- i have no idea what that Su Me girl was talking about; her comments are utterly BAFFLING considering that this story was extremely well written and insightful. Congrats on another job well done :) I'm envious of your ability to get into the heads of these characters. Looking forward to more stuff from you ;)
Karisan-karisan
2005-01-19 . chapter 1
Hi there! After reading this story i should tell you that you do write English very well! You have to believe in yourself a bit more! This story is really deep! I think that you do put yourself in the characters' shoes. i can't write things like you because I always write from the outside, and you write from the inside! (I hope you understand what I mean). You have a talent, don't waste it! (actually you have more than one talent, because you do draw pretty well too!).
I want to say thank you for your review! Yes I'm from Europe too, though Portugal is very far from Croatia (maybe next year Crotian will be one of the European Union official languages as well, right?) if that's the case, I will try to learn it as well! (I really like to learn more languages) You really know a lot of languages! Serbian, Bosnian and Slovenian!? My God aren't those languages too difficult? For me the German it's the most difficult language I have ever studied and I did it for 5 years!
I do not know what is the Cyrillic alphabet, can you tell me?
I don't know Japanese very well but my sister has a friend who is Japanese and she is trying to teach us (but it's so hard :P) By the way, after the Portuguese, English is my second language because my parents spent 12 years in the UK before i was born.
I wrote my story in Portuguese because it wasn't supposed to be online. I was only writing for me and my sister to read, because we are huge fans of Tekken, but then she convinced me to publish it (I'm now translating the chapter 27).
Well, actually you did help me to understand Jun a lot better, i think now that she is more important than i thought she was...so thank you very much and keep writing, and drawing! I hope you write one chapter about Nina soon, cause I would really enjoy it!

See ya and take care!

And thank you SO much for your kind words!
Shrike
2005-01-18 . chapter 1
had to repost… technical problems. The reviews are all copied and posted after the story, no fear . Everyone has a right to an opinion ne…
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