Hope you get a chance to update soon. Wishing you inspiration.

Ok, this is a review for all of the chapters up until now... I couldn't stop reading - hence the late time! Bloody great Kristin, loved reading about Montmorency (especially how instead of a dead ** school you made it into a rich school, that would have had to take a LOT of imagination), loved reading about everyone in it - especially the bit about casey! Loved all the joking around... very Monty, love Malfoy's character (is hailey fictional or real, coz I'm totally jealous if she's real!) Do I get to, well you know - I'm not sure if its still a secret anymore, the harry thing? My only regret is leaving it so long to read! I knew you said you were re-doing the previous chapters but I didn't know you had done so much already... although now that I'm caught up you will now have the familiar nagging *I want more! Screw your exams, harry is clearly more important!* When is the next chapter? See I've started already! Anyways, I better actually go to bed now - but seriously, i expect to see your name on a book in the next 5 years, stuff uni - as if its actually going to help when all we're doing is waiting for the next harry book!
Love Leah
P.S I'm the seeker, yeah!!
P.P.S The beauty thing, so not
P.P.P.S Just in case I didn't get my point across already, I'm loving the story

HAHA! MOLESTER SEEKER! God, that made my day. Thanks a bunch :D. I really enjoyed this chapter, especially the whole obliviate thing. I'm really anxious to find out what happened. :D Can't wait to read more :D

OMG ** AWESOME

HARRY WAS IMPRESSED BY ME??!?!? I mean, US, Hary was MOST impressed by us. You rule kristin. though if leah gets harry i will be most disappointed. cant wait for the next chapter, was a bit unfair leaving it like that so we (the fans) deserve a quick break and then the next one. SO HURRY UP.

Okay, i HAD to drop a line on this chapter. :) Did you ever watch Boy Meets World when it was on air, cuz the whole Harry-Ron relationship is totally like Cory and Shawn off the show (which is/was another one of my many obsessions). NEways, i just wanted to tell you how much i loved the little scenes between them, it's nice to see Harry just being a happy person on occassion.
Queeny C

Wow! This is just...an amazing story already. I just wanted to let you know that i stumbled upon this by accident but that i'm already totally into it. :) Unfortunately, i'm like the world's worst reviewer (i've NEVER reviewed on EVERY chapter of a story) so don't take offense if you don't hear from me alot in the future, i promise you i'm still reading your story like the obsessive maniac that i am, so PLEASE keep updating :)
Queeny C

apology accepted...
i bet that harry does end up saving malfoy in the end...but anyway
chapter 9?

MinorMistake

P.S. Hope the computer's alive and running..i hate it when mine gets a virus..it takes forever to get it fixed..

Such a great story. It needs more circulation among the fanfiction readers. Great ideas about the obliviation, Harry and Draco, Miss Snape, the Brethren, the hoity toity rich school. I love reading this story.

You put that gay guy in for me, didn't you? I love you, you know.

Lovely chapter even though it was a little shortess.

plez update! i've been looking evey couple days but u still haven't updated!!

not bad

Lol, yes Kristin I have FINALLY read the last chapter. Very sorry, been too pre-occupied. Dismal excuse as this chapter was very hm revealing and regret not reading it sooner.WELL DONE LEAH AWESOME IDEA HUN. Yes, Tony eh? Lol if other people were to read this review they would find it very confusing I believe. heheh. Changes to old chapter very excellent also.

love your work

also bad news on 'Ron' front...if you get my meaning, as in, the 'person' that I know.

Yes still imagining what other people must think of this review.

UPDATE!

Well, such a treat to find such a good story. I like all the complications, the uncertainty about Draco, the 4 powerful women, and the seer, especially. I liked Draco's use of the word copulating... muggles are similar to animals in his lexicon.

And Harry is fun, too. The most powerful in his year, but not superpowerful. A worrier! And yet with some initiative--but not taking over Hogwarts at all. The girls chasing him ("I knew the red teeshirts would work")! I also really, really like the trio messing around, especially Ron and Harry, like the scene in front of Flitwick's classroom door. What a riot. You can really see Ron as Harry's best friend in this story and not just his sidekick. Plus that Camraderie spell. It's just so like teenagers do do that spell, and then accuse the one who has you as their "mist person" of draining you of your power during NEWTS.

Thanks so much for this story. It's the closest to canon I've seen in a long time.

Hey, great story, I'm gonna go straight into my critique.

Plot: good multi layer plot. You have alot of things going on, which can be confusing, but you execute well. I hope you're gonna try and tie it all together at the end, because it seems to be tieable.

Characters: Interesting twist on having malfoy start to turn. It's working well because it doens't happen just all of the sudden, which is common in fanfiction. Malfoy woulnd't just change in asnap, he'd take some time, and even then he'd still be resistent. Salima is also an interesting development/addition.
Thank you for making harry just as fickle and shhy around girls as he is in the series, some people make him into some sort of romantic guru and it's disturbing.

Execution: I'll be more specific about when I'm only reviewing one chapter because after 5 you forget what you noticed. (meaning if you write more, I'll critique each chapter carefully). Ah, one thing I did notice was that there were some sentences that I simply could not decipher a meaning out of. I dunno how that helps, but there it is anyway.

Please write more, I'll write nice, long reviews.